I actually think Alice is kind of a bitch but on this, I agree with her. Just because Jasper did the whole romantic thing with his first wife, that doesn’t mean Alice didn’t deserve the same

This chapter was so sweet! I’m not a native English speaker but I can keep track of almost everything and let me tell you that I’m loving it all, finally they’ll have their happy ending with the right person, although the story it’s only beginning

Hola muchas gracias por la historia me ha encantado!
Disfruté mucho leyendo como encontraron el amor verdadero y cómo crecieron como personas fuertes.
Gracias por la historia.
Saludos de mi lindo Ecuador.
Adriu

'"Um, ew," Bella said with a scrunched nose. "I'm not homophobic or anything, but the thought of two men doing it just makes me..."
"You don't even need to finish that statement, love. I completely agree," I said with a nervous chuckle.'

This is an intolerant comment in itself. It's offensive, and while I know you didn't mean it that way, it is and it ruins the story for me. I've read this story 3/4 times now and everytime I read this part it makes me sad and feel unaccepted. I'm a lesbian so it's not quite the same but I've heard comments like this my whole life, whether meant maliciously or not, and it chips away at you over time. I just want to make you aware because there could be others reading this/who have read this/ who may read this in the future who feel the same way I do.

To anyone who may be suppressing their sexuality or gender due to outside influences, nothing is worth sacrificing your happiness over. Live your life for you. There are people who love you and if these people aren't in your life right now, find them because family aren't always the ones you have a blood connection to.

A baby, yeah
Is Emmett crazy?

Okay... this is getting ridiculous... there is no way Edward would do this. I was loving your story, but all this crap with Carlisle and Emmett is over the top and making me hate the story.

I’ll ensure to see where it goes.

I love sweet Edward.

Oh they sweet together.

You are right they asshole and jerks, I don't like them.

I like this chapter.

I love Geekward.

Very sad to see the offensive termmongoloid" in this chapter. Wish you hadn't.

Fantastic story!

I loved this so much it was wonderful thank you Toni Smith

crazy Emmett