Reviews for Traveling Solider
serenityselena chapter 11 . 3/26/2016
some interesting conversations...
hopefully things will be OK...
eagerly awaiting to read more :)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
Why do you think you have to write a short character biography for the characters? Anyone who is reading this already knows who they are, and someone who doesn’t won’t care. Your character descriptions are trite, tiring to read, and actually downright annoying to be honest, they disrupt and destroy the flow, which isn’t good to begin with.

Grammar is confused, confusing, downright painful at times, you need a proof reader.

There is NO reason NCIS would be looking at returning prisoners unless they were suspected of having committed some type of crime, so story blows from that point on.

Your history for BTVS is just wrong and adds to the general badness of the story.
serenityselena chapter 10 . 1/18/2014
amusing chapter... it sure made me laugh...
what happened to chapter 10?... ch 9 & 10 are the same?!
hope to read more soon :)
Aria Dragoncrest chapter 8 . 9/1/2013
Adorable
Kree Minory chapter 8 . 8/27/2013
I gotta ask, where did the idea of the mommy slide come from? That was better than the stork.
wmwhitewolf chapter 8 . 8/17/2013
OMG I love it, the kids are priceless in this story, PLEASE MORE SOON keep up the great work
Booker10 chapter 8 . 7/26/2013
Lol this chapter cracked me up!:D I'm so glad you updated!

Please update soon!
serenityselena chapter 8 . 7/26/2013
OMG... that was simply hilarious...
fantastic chapter... *huge smile*
eagerly awaiting to read more :)
Guest chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
i found this story very very very confusing and hard to follow
serenityselena chapter 6 . 8/15/2012
awww... that was so sweet...
hope to read more soon :)
Netchka chapter 6 . 7/9/2012
Oooooooooh Willow and Graham, good combination. AU's are always so interesting to read. Always something slightly different about the charactors. Continue please, can't wait for the rest of the chapters.
NaeNae1495 chapter 6 . 5/29/2012
That was totally worth the wait. The chapter was perfect with the Willow and Graham! They were so cute and the proposal was perfect! Update soon!
rebelmagnus chapter 5 . 1/3/2012
Great Story!
Village-Mystic chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Not so sure about all of the multiple backstory changes, but I do like the idea of Willow being Abby's lab assistant.
GothChiq80 chapter 5 . 12/21/2011
Poor Graham, what an awful grandfather he has! I hope that the he and Willow will be happy together and their happiness will be rubbed in the grandfather's face. Great chapter!
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