Reviews for The Dove in the Eye of the Storm
qhrciskrpc chapter 4 . 7/18
This chapter was awesome.
Guest chapter 51 . 7/13
Only 14 more months until Dove meets Proprosal. Please come back soon!
Guest chapter 47 . 4/13
Edward needs to acknowledge-to himself-that
he can do all of that WITHOUT Jaspers aide.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 51 . 4/14
I want to wring Bellas neck! Why would
she do that? Here the boy is, struggling
with a horrifying flashback, and she's
going to try to take advantage of it?! WTF?
THEN, she tells him (in essence) that she
might not want marriage at all, and that
IF it happens, he'll have to wait longer,
PLUS, she wants him to still consummate
their mated bond in the original timeframe.
The fact that Alice TOLD HER why he needs
the legitimacy of marriage didn't even seem
to COMPUTE with her! I'm extremely
disappointed in her right now.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 49 . 4/14
Part of me really wants to rush ahead and read
IHFUT and MHMB! LOL I'm eager to see him
understand that he IS strong enough to resist
hurting his love. The fact that he kicked that
bead of blood from her lip without his bloodlust
taking over says it all!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 48 . 4/14
It cracks me up that he can't admit to being
turned on by her touch. He already knows how
much she enjoys his, and doesn't judge HER
reactions...
I hope Lana doesn't die before they go to
college!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 46 . 4/13
How can the damage to his psyche be undone?
You just can't UNsee something like that. He's
already retreating and subconsciously creating
Plan B. The one that leads to heartache. Ugh!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 45 . 4/13
I can't even...
Jasper is right to be angry at Carlisle and Alice,
and to be concerned about Edwards mental
health, both short and long term! I'm stunned.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 44 . 4/13
Instead of Seth, Edward has bonded with Jared!
I'm with Edward, Alices 'lullaby' was truly morbid.
I loved Bellas prayer. I hope Jasper can help his
dearest friends to see the futility of their efforts.
Unfortunately, some are beyond the grip of grace,
because of the choices they've made. Lila is an
extremely twisted soul. :(
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 43 . 4/13
*speechless*
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 42 . 4/13
So, he calmed down enough to have this
conversation. But...when will he let the guys
tell him about the 'sleeping?' He's so sure
that God is punishing him with death when
he masturbates too much. You'd THINK he'd
put two and two together, but this IS Eddie
we're talking about, so...
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 41 . 4/12
I love Jasper. *sigh*
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 40 . 4/12
Did Charlie hear that?!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 39 . 4/12
LMAO I love that Edward suddenly
addresses the readers directly. That
was great. And Bella with the bat was
awesome. LOL
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 38 . 4/12
Well, THAT puts a different twist on
Volterra and New Moon...and Jane.
Wow.
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