|Reviews for Remember Me?|
| Kritibhavya chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
| Luna25684 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
How can the child be 6 when it's only been 5 years? That would mean that she's been one when Jack left, won't it?
| Angela chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
hey, that was a good one to read! thanks for posting
| Ki-Chan Riker chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Good. But there is no plot, besides Jack finding out about Rosalinda. Is Rosa kidnapped, and Jack and Angelica have to rescue her. I really don't think Angelica would welcome Jack back with open arms, especially in the first chapter. She would want to kill him more, or slap him like Scarlet and Giselle. Along the way to rescuing Rosa, They could over come the past and Then Angelica would warm up to Jack. Jack needs to be more surprised when he finds out about Rosa. More sword fights will help the slow scenes. More drama. This has positional, just fix and tweak things. Good basis. Rosa is so sweet, I like it a five year old. Angelica needs to be more protective, like a mother bear defending cubs, around Jack. Letting him Waltz in and take over Rosa's life with out a fuss goes agaisnt ever mother bone in Angelica's body. She is a rough pirate, one of the best and she's not protective of her daughter is something I don't Believe. -Kelly Riker
| Doradus Fairywinkle-Cosma chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
Can you make this a longer story? I'd like to see what their lives would be like as a family.
| Mishelle20 chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
| swancatic chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Love it! Maybe you can make it a story?
| Nikki-fan chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I love this OS. It's so sweet:) Jack did return to the island where he had left Angelica and he sees his daughter. What about another chapter? Or maybe a little story? How you describe things is very good:)
| MauraRizzoli chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
I love it. :D I soooo want to see the movie now. Great job, Sam.
I hope you do another chapter. ;) Or another story like this. :D