Reviews for The Road Not Taken
tabby chapter 6 . 11/2/2015
Where is the rest? What happens? Do Bella and Edward get a HEA? What happens to Bella's boys?
magmom4 chapter 6 . 9/17/2014
This is a strange ending.
magmom2 chapter 6 . 1/28/2013
It's been a year since this chapter. Am I to understand that you have no intention of finishing it?
teambellaedward chapter 6 . 1/16/2012
Lady Dragona chapter 6 . 1/16/2012
I love how the treaty saved the newborn werewolf/vampire hybrid. I also am enjoying the building relationship between Bella and Edward. SO glad to see this story up again.
Zapphe chapter 5 . 12/25/2011
You obviously are a good writer but unfortunate I dont like the turn out of the story and the fact that Bella seems to think more about her relationships with her men in her life then her kids make me dislike her even more.
FourShot411 chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
Well, I think your sequel is going amazingly well. I actually read the first chapters months ago, but forgot to review (I think)... I love what you've done with the story. I've never been a huge Edward fan and it's hard to imagine the physical age difference between them. However, I'm enjoying Edward's docile nature. It's hard to dislike a character that's willing to sacrifice a century of servitude for love. Plus, he's already endured quite a bit. You can't help but feel sorry for him.

I really like the steady relationships. I'm glad Bella is still comminicating with the pack. I think the most heartbreaking thing about this story are her sons. They have to grow up with either of their parents. But, like I mentioned in a previous review, I hope the pups manage to see their mother once again. Would they resent her? Love her still?

I'm looking forward to where this story is going. I'm especially curious about this random mission. I have to strangest feeling that I read this before... Did you repost? *shrugs* Regardless, I wish you the best of luck. Don't fret over the reviews. I'm still a fan.
Lady Dragona chapter 5 . 11/20/2011
I love that Edward is starting to see a change in Bella that she might want to be with him again. I think it is going to make things much more bearable for him. I to wonder why Bella and Edward are being sent on this mission to Peru.
teambellaedward chapter 5 . 11/19/2011
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klarsen117 chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Wow, this is really sad, I don't think I can continue. I'll try though. As soon as I got your email reply, my eyes started watering, remembering what happened.
Lady Dragona chapter 4 . 10/28/2011
I am glad to see you updating this story again. I love reading it. I think Heidi is helping Bella. I wonder if she sees more than BElla does. I am sure she sees the way Bella and Edward are together more clearly than either of them do. I am glad that Bella is starting to move on with her life. I look forward to the next chapter.
Lady Dragona chapter 3 . 8/24/2011
I love this story and the way it shows the nature of souls. The way Edward and BElla are together is nice and comfortable. I know Edward wishes for more. I am sure it time he will get it. The fact that Marcus is desiring to know Bella's special ability tells me he knows more than he is letting on. I look forward to the meeting with Marcus and Aro.

I don't have any stories that I cam currently publishing, but I would be happy to pass this story on as an idea in other reviews I write for the other stories I am reading. Sometimes the best stories get the least recognition.
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