|Reviews for Yearning for the Moon|
| Mageblood chapter 3 . 8/2/2011
Please update a new chapter soon, after Agatha's night I can't wait to see how they will all react in the daylight hours.
| ImperialGirl chapter 3 . 6/21/2011
Hmmm...so does Gil like it a bit rough? (Bang's bad influence, minding him in Paris?) At least in his dreaming, subconscious mind.
I cannot wait to see Agatha's version of the night.
| ThirstySatyr chapter 3 . 6/19/2011
Good god-damn, and other such phrases.
This is excellent. I am particularly fond of the depth of character you've given Gil. Its easy to paint Tarvek as the one with motive under motive, and frequently fanfiction tries to make Gil out to be the complete opposite - just some nice guy who happens to be in love. When the reality is that Gil has just as much conniving ability as Tarvek, and you've demonstrated that wonderfully.
On a side note, your translation to English is quite good - though you use the word "between" a little oddly in places.
I am very much looking forward to more!