Reviews for The Seven Deadly Sins
JuliaAurelia chapter 3 . 6/17/2011
Aw, poor Fara! And Denny doesn't help, as usual.
JuliaAurelia chapter 4 . 6/17/2011
Go Aragorn! This is excellent for "wrath!"
Virtuella chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
A little boy who is too fond of cakes? Hm, I think I may have one like that at home...
Virtuella chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Oh-oh, they really didn't get off to a good start, did they?
Darkover chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
Dear Linda: Poor Eldarion! He may have been rather greedy, but he is just a youngster, and they tend not to think about sharing unless they are prompted to do so. At any rate, he is learning that gluttony carries its own punishment! Thank you for writing and posting this, and I happily await new chapters. Sincerely, Darkover
Darkover chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Dear Linda: It may seem as if Thorongil is the proud one here, but I suspect it is really Denethor who is guilty of pride, as Minas Tirith probably does not compare to Rivendell. As an apparent newcomer in Gondor, Thorongil's remark might have been a bit tactless, but essentially he was just telling the truth, and I'm sure he did miss his Elven family and sweetheart. But sometimes two people just rub each other the wrong way from the very beginning, and I suspect that was the case between Aragorn and Denethor. As usual, you have done a fine job of portraying this. Thanks for writing and posting this. Sincerely, Darkover
Sarahbarr17 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Denethor feels that Thorongil is insufferably proud. Yet he himself is guilty of the sins of envy and pride as far as Thorongil is concerned! (or so I feel...)


Sarah x
Animekitty47 chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
This drabble was cute and the Pride one was a nice snapshot too. :D Hmmmm, I'm going to guess...envy or greed will be next. I wonder if I'll be right? :D
AzureSkye23 chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
So, I'm reviewing over here as to not double review at Stories of Arda. I truly don't think they'd mind...but still. LOL, yes, too much of a good thing can be a bad thing. And this is a lesson I don't think Eldarion will be forgetting! I can't help wondering if Aragorn did something similar when he was that age...
JuliaAurelia chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
Yep, I think it will be awhile before Eladarion feels like eating his former favorite treat again!
JuliaAurelia chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Denny in full form, I see. Well, what else could we expect.
Deandra chapter 2 . 6/4/2011
Oh, but they taste so good while we're eating them! Why do they have to cramp the stomach and pad the hips after the fact?

- Deandra
Deandra chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Ah, yes. Denethor would not take kindly to a perceived slight on his City.

- Deandra
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