|Reviews for Mad Maggie|
| ccase13 chapter 2 . 6/8/2011
The mad ghost was very interesting.
I did love the Indiana Jones approches to the lighthouse, it looked like they were gonna die before they ever met the ghost.
I especially liked how they got thanked and at least some payment. I think the show should mention grateful people more often. Thanks for writing for us.
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
This is a good story. I can just SEE Dean fretting over his beloved Impala on a rusty old ferry.
Thanks for wrtiting for us.
| Beatlesfan90 chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
LOVED it! Oh my... I can't even think of a good enough word to describe my love for this story! It was awesome, Great, amazing, sweet, with a bunch of brotherly love thrown in. LOVED IT!
Thanks for sharing your talent with us all! Keep writing!
| skag trendy chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
Superb finish, hon. Dean's race against the tide to save Sam, the sad story of Mad Maggie's heartbreak... All wonderfullu written.
And I can just picture that pool of illuminated water in the underground cave, not to mention the secret passageway... Very Scooby Doo and Famous Five! LoL.
Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
| fatgymrat chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
absolutely riveting. I couldn't stop reading till I was finished. you never cease to amaze me
| skag trendy chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Liking this so far, hon. Nice and creepy. I've always had a soft spot for ghost stories involving light houses.
| apieceofcake chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
Very enjoyable, thank you :-)
| Madebyme chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
That was thoroughly entertaining! You tied together the loose ends neatly, shone some light on the mystery of Mad Maggie and Gideon as well as giving us some more nail biting action.
Neat twist too with having Sam chained in the cave with the rising water just like poor Gideon, explaining one of the reasons why Maggie went so mad. The descriptions of the cave were vivid and quite breathtaking and I just love hidden rooms and caves, the entrance was inspired and gosh, I wish I had one of my own!
Through out the whole story there was plenty of yummy details that I dug my teeth into including the Dean's rescue quip about onions and rescue breathing, the Scooby Do references, all the yummy h/c and end of hunt motel banter. But what stood out for me was the simplicity of the fic; a good old fashioned ghostly tale with some whumpage - it's everything I could ask for!
You've certainly put a lot of research into the fic and I think it gives the story a real powerful and spooky edge, knowing its based on real ghostly tales. And ew, a picture made from hair is pretty creepy, but a tooth pick, that's a step too far!
This was a wonderful fic, full of twists and turns and grisly details! Thanks so much for sharing, I was entertained throughout and left with a smile on my face! Take care, Abbi
| Madebyme chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Right rrom the get go you plunged us straight into the action - fast paced and thrilling! What an awesome start to an excellent fic!
I adored the Indiana Jones styled obstacles with the stairs and bridge, both boys having close calls before they even reach the lighthouse! And the imagery of the Lighthouse was beautifully done, creepy and completely compelling in a magical sort of way.
I loved all the mutual whumpage too because damn, these poor boys are really suffering! Plus as always with your writing, the banter is so easily and perfectly captured.
I love the mystery surrounding Mad Maggie and Gideon - clearly there's something going on there but I liked how you've linked Sam with her husband. I'm guessing that's going to complicate things a whole lot more in the next chapter!
Right, I'm off for more, this is delicious and I just can't tear my eyes from the screen! Take care, Abbi
| hotshow chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
I thought this was a very good story.
Did you have any particular season in mind when you wrote it.
Looking forward to your next story.
| KKBELVIS chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
I could so live in a lighthouse!
Love all your research...especially about the phosphorescence cave! And Maggie thinking Sam was Giddion was an especially neat added touch.
Thank you for your hard work and tender care in creating a grand story for us to read.
| SunnyZim chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
What a treat to get another story from you so quickly! I absolutely loved this story - it kept me up way past my bedtime because it was so gripping! As always, I love the research that you put into your stories - it gives them a very authentic feel and I learn new things, which is always fun! I loved the fact that Maggie thought Sam was her husband - poor Sammy really does always attract the crazy ones (that perverted old lady in Red Sky at Morning comes to mind...) and I must admit I couldn't stop laughing at Dean's comments regarding giving Sam mouth to mouth - I must admit I cringed at his description of his unshaven face and his onion breath too! Great banter between the brothers as always and a truly well-written and entertaining story;-) Out of interest (I can't remember if I've asked you this before) but have you thought of writing original fiction? I think you'd be great at it;-)
| Jane88 chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
Great story, I ennjoyed this a lot!
"Two close calls even before the spirit shows up. That's some kind of record, even for us."
That's what I thought... so true. ;) Got another one:
"Relax. Lightning's gonna go after the tallest thing here." Dean... "Lucky for me, that would be you."
Had to laugh so hard. ;)
Like the lighthouse plot, there should be an episode with one. And I loved hurt Dean still doing everything he could to rescue Sam. Poor guy, shackled and almost drowning, that was so exciting. And I looked up the blue cave, really beautiful. Really great work, thanks so much!
| ncis-lady chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
Ah well, I guess I'm repeating myself here but: really great story! You just gotta love the boys when they take care of each other. I must say that I missed that during the last season (which is why I'm currently re-watching season 2 ;)).
Thanks for the a/n. Very good job on the research, it's kinda cool to know that the story's based on an actual myth. (One more reason why the story would make a damn good episode on the show)
| Colby's girl chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
Woohoo! That was fun and intense. I'm happy you posted it all and I was able to read it in it's entirety. So pleased to read one of your fabulous stories. Cheers!
PS I googled the light house while reading the beginning so I had a great visual while reading.