|Reviews for Mad Maggie|
| pandora jazz chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
I enjoyed reading this story last summer in the zine. I sure hope I remembered to say thanks for sharing it with us.
I love the description of the lighthouse and what a great hunt. Maggie was a very scary ghost, especially when the salt didn't work to keep her away.
I like how you started your story with the brothers on the island and added the suspense right away when they were both in trouble. Then you gave us some background on how the brothers ended up on the island before continuing the story.
What a wonderful fight between Dean and Maggie. I loved this line from Dean about Sam. "You need yours eyes checked, sister. His name is Sam. Last name Winchester – same as mine. That says he belongs with me."
When Dean killed Maggie with the rock salt in his hand. That was a great idea on your part, very original.
Wonderful ending as Dean worked to save Sam and also the brothers were thanked for once with a little extra cash so they can rest up before their next hunt.
Thanks again for sharing your story with us.
I enjoyed reading it again.
| spnMom chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
Great story, lots of whumpage... stellar. Thanks for posting!
| TinTin11 chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
Wow, this was amazing! A wonderful read! I like how you incorporated real places and facts into it too, it makes the story much more relatable! Great job with this! :o)
| Sparkiebunny chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
Exceptional story! Loved it! :)
| Nana56 chapter 2 . 6/12/2011
Quite the story! I love how you took the two lighthouses and combined them into one fic. It's romantic in a crazy, insane way. She was just out and out nuts! lol
And of course the best part is the brothers, as always and you did your usual awesome job with them. The snark, the fear for each other, and their care for each other just make for a perfect SN fic. :D
Well done! :)
| detroiter stranded in tucson chapter 2 . 6/11/2011
...I don't have a computer of my own so read you at the library...I have been reading for quite some time and I just wanted you to know how much I appreaciate you sharing your fine writting talents with all of us...even the lurkers...you are a great story teller and have really captured the spirit of both boys...Please continue ...
| ccase13 chapter 2 . 6/8/2011
The mad ghost was very interesting.
I did love the Indiana Jones approches to the lighthouse, it looked like they were gonna die before they ever met the ghost.
I especially liked how they got thanked and at least some payment. I think the show should mention grateful people more often. Thanks for writing for us.
| ccase13 chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
This is a good story. I can just SEE Dean fretting over his beloved Impala on a rusty old ferry.
Thanks for wrtiting for us.
| Beatlesfan90 chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
LOVED it! Oh my... I can't even think of a good enough word to describe my love for this story! It was awesome, Great, amazing, sweet, with a bunch of brotherly love thrown in. LOVED IT!
Thanks for sharing your talent with us all! Keep writing!
| skag trendy chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
Superb finish, hon. Dean's race against the tide to save Sam, the sad story of Mad Maggie's heartbreak... All wonderfullu written.
And I can just picture that pool of illuminated water in the underground cave, not to mention the secret passageway... Very Scooby Doo and Famous Five! LoL.
Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
| fatgymrat chapter 2 . 6/7/2011
absolutely riveting. I couldn't stop reading till I was finished. you never cease to amaze me
| skag trendy chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Liking this so far, hon. Nice and creepy. I've always had a soft spot for ghost stories involving light houses.
| apieceofcake chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
Very enjoyable, thank you :-)
| Madebyme chapter 2 . 6/6/2011
That was thoroughly entertaining! You tied together the loose ends neatly, shone some light on the mystery of Mad Maggie and Gideon as well as giving us some more nail biting action.
Neat twist too with having Sam chained in the cave with the rising water just like poor Gideon, explaining one of the reasons why Maggie went so mad. The descriptions of the cave were vivid and quite breathtaking and I just love hidden rooms and caves, the entrance was inspired and gosh, I wish I had one of my own!
Through out the whole story there was plenty of yummy details that I dug my teeth into including the Dean's rescue quip about onions and rescue breathing, the Scooby Do references, all the yummy h/c and end of hunt motel banter. But what stood out for me was the simplicity of the fic; a good old fashioned ghostly tale with some whumpage - it's everything I could ask for!
You've certainly put a lot of research into the fic and I think it gives the story a real powerful and spooky edge, knowing its based on real ghostly tales. And ew, a picture made from hair is pretty creepy, but a tooth pick, that's a step too far!
This was a wonderful fic, full of twists and turns and grisly details! Thanks so much for sharing, I was entertained throughout and left with a smile on my face! Take care, Abbi
| Madebyme chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Right rrom the get go you plunged us straight into the action - fast paced and thrilling! What an awesome start to an excellent fic!
I adored the Indiana Jones styled obstacles with the stairs and bridge, both boys having close calls before they even reach the lighthouse! And the imagery of the Lighthouse was beautifully done, creepy and completely compelling in a magical sort of way.
I loved all the mutual whumpage too because damn, these poor boys are really suffering! Plus as always with your writing, the banter is so easily and perfectly captured.
I love the mystery surrounding Mad Maggie and Gideon - clearly there's something going on there but I liked how you've linked Sam with her husband. I'm guessing that's going to complicate things a whole lot more in the next chapter!
Right, I'm off for more, this is delicious and I just can't tear my eyes from the screen! Take care, Abbi