Reviews for Youkaigakure |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh wow a different Naruto fic; amazing. Please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update its an awesome story |
![]() ![]() I just thought of something for the Land of Waves arc, if you're going to do it. In Chapter 3, when Kushina was talking to Mikoto and Sasuke, she mentioned that vampires won't be sedated by water if wolfsbane is added to it. So, to make sure Sasuke doesn't drown or something, he could carry wolfsbane with him. Or maybe Mikoto could make some kind of lotion for him. Sunscreen would probably be a good idea, too... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really neat fic here. I haven't read anything by you in quite some time, and I decided to remedy that. I was at first going to reread your Akane fics, but a few of your others caught my eye and demanded to be read first. Since I'm really sick at the moment, I have a lot of time to reread them all, so... Thanks for writing this, bye for now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes yes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon |
![]() ![]() Whoa. Fugaku is not only a told prick, but his sense of humor is absolutely horrid. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a good story keep up the good work, though i really hope you get more creative with pairings than naruhina it's completely over done and frankly completely dull as well even when well written, so i implore you on my knees! don't make that the pairing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fugaku...Must...Die! *Growling ferally* |
![]() ![]() ![]() your the hokage kushina |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, this is definetely a very good story that you have set up with a strong Naru/Ino/Saku/Hina set up, especially given that Naruto falls under CRA and, well, they are demons so I would assume it could be in their nature. I can't wait for an update so please do one soon. |
![]() ![]() If you start consider pairings I recommend naruto/sakura sasuke /kaede or naruto/yukumo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this story quicker. I like it. Good chapter and update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your variation on the genin test. Very creative and original. I also your the scene between Danzo and 'Mito'. Though I would have to re-read previous chapters for your characterization of Danzo, I find it interesting you have Danzo trying to get ROOT formally reactivated, with official sanction. Of course, it remains to be seen where you take this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep up your good work BP |