Reviews for Youkaigakure
Guest chapter 12 . 8/23/2017
First things first, I love this story and I'm glad it's still going. Now, with that out of the way:
1. Why, on an island nation, would Kushina think that adding a second vampire would be a good idea? Was no one else available? Does no team have a mermaid?
2. I don't care whether the Naruto pairing is monogamous, threesome, or harem, as long as he is with Hinata.
Guest chapter 13 . 8/22/2017
Your story is great and the characterizations were spot on. Just please don't do harem. Maybe you should pair him with Hinata or Sakura. Nothing kills a good story than an overbundance of romance and Naruto doesn'tstrike me as a cheater. Andnothing ruins a good heroine than making her a mindless bimbo and worse, there's so may of them.
Leaf Ranger chapter 13 . 8/23/2017
Huh...I was expecting Haku to be a vampire, not be found by Orochimaru. That's going to suck. I feel bad for Haku, but also for our genin, cuz they're going to be in big trouble now. x.x

Keep up the good work!
WhiteFangDarkClaw chapter 13 . 8/23/2017
Finally The Brown Phantom has come back to FanFiction. Awesome chapter glad you updated.
R-king 93 chapter 13 . 8/23/2017
That was good
kage88 chapter 13 . 8/23/2017
great that it was updated again
VFSNAKE chapter 13 . 8/22/2017
Good chapter. Not to keen on the prank played by sasuke. I demand revenge!
61394 chapter 13 . 8/22/2017
To be honest I'm surprised you updated this one after so long

Don't take that in the wrong way it was a good surprise and I hope to see more updates in the future
Morriganna chapter 12 . 1/27/2017
Naruto should be with Hinata or her and Sakura.
Anubismark chapter 12 . 11/8/2016
I happen to think this is your most interesting story line so far. I vote harem, and that you should continue this tale
Otaku of Anime chapter 12 . 8/28/2016
The story is amazing so far. Keep up the great work
Phoenix774 chapter 12 . 8/13/2016
update soon please because this is an awesome story.
Valle95 chapter 12 . 6/24/2016
Hello I would like to tell you that this is a good story. I have two questions though the first question is what kind of demon is sai. The second question is did someone adopt this story or is it still your own and you just haven't had time to write.
Redargetlam95 chapter 12 . 2/25/2016
Very well done, interesting idea with a good execution and twist to keep it fresh! Personally I have no issues with a harem as Naruto is one of the few anime/manga where it seems to do well, but it is your story so do what you want to. It was nice to see the changes start a ripple from canon as the story went, and good job on not completely sticking to canon while still having elements present. That being said, it may be best to put the comparisons you are making in parentheses or hyphens or something, because- at least for me- having that thought in the midst of a character's stream of consciousness is a little disorienting. Either way, well done and keep up the good work!
ImaginationAngel chapter 12 . 10/13/2015
I really like this story. I don't mind Naruto having a harem, especially the girls you've chosen. I like each of the girls for different reasons, and they all would be great partners/mates for Naruto. The change in Wave mission and just fighting Haku at the bridge will be very interesting. I hope you update again soon!
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