Reviews for Retracing Your Steps
Kingdom Hearts KeyBlade chapter 1 . 4/21/2014
i really want these stories to continue...i love these stories...
samettikettu chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
I wish that you'd continue this!
I smell an exciting and beautiful fic! This was awesome. I like the way you described Gary. Perrrfecto!
Orithyea chapter 2 . 5/1/2013
I read the first version of this and was intrigued immediately. Are you going to continue this? I hope you do. Honestly, this is the first Pokemon story I read, haha.
iLovePokemon15 chapter 2 . 4/15/2013
I love your story, even though I'm a guy over here, I still appreciate the story and author itself. You have such an amazing/creative mind. :))))
pokemaster101 chapter 2 . 11/4/2012
Aw Gary! Tisk tisk tisk!

Oooooo confrontation ;D

Update please!

Keep it up! 8DDDDD
7colornotebook chapter 2 . 6/5/2012
sunokofairytale chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
Can't wait for an update. Good job.
canadian-budew chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
I read your other story first and I can understand when people want to redo their stories (I've done it myself) and change things. Even though it hasn't got a lot of plot yet its already pulled me in because I know that this is going to be a good story. Good work so far. I hope to see the same results when this is updated!
Scattered Petals chapter 2 . 12/17/2011
Argh, the cliff-hanger. ;3;/

Loving this so far, will be waiting for continuation! *w*b
sapphire495 chapter 2 . 11/26/2011
great story, hope you update soon:)
Rose Townson chapter 2 . 10/9/2011
Yay! Updates! :) I like this story I'm so excited any time Gary and ash even interact! :) sorry to hear about your busy schedule and good luck with doing well in everything! :) please update again soon :)
FeraNelia chapter 2 . 9/24/2011
Now that wasn't a filler at all; I think it's actually a very important chapter. Sure nothing big happens, but it's important to give the characters time and space to clear their thoughts, and let the readers know what's going on inside their heads~ I think this chapter made things a lot clearer, and can't wait to see what happens next! And what a cliffhanger; I hope you update soon~ Of course you don't have to hurry, and definitely not to update every week *laughs* (Though many stories seem to be taking a long break, for many months, so I guess I'm hoping that this wouldn't be one of those ") Just take your time, and don't let school work and everything else bring you down; rememeber to relax, too!~

But anyway, I really like your writing style, and I THINK I didn't spot any mistakes; I'll let you know if I did later~ Keep it going, I love this story so far~
Snow Leopard Pasha chapter 2 . 9/22/2011
Um, first, I don't think I'd call this a 'filler' chapter or boring, other than you maybe could have cut out a bit of the party stuff. It was pretty good, and had some important stuff in it, so that's not a 'filler' at any time.

Second...when do you even have time to sleep with all the things you're doing? Can't you cut out 1 or 2 of them, or do your parents insist you take them? Well, if you like doing them all...I don't know. Even things I liked, I usually only picked 1 to do at any one time, not all of them. Wow.

Either way, your writing's still good, so I hope you still have time to update. :D
x-AKATSUKI-x-HEIR-x chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
OMG! Your writings are sooo totally amazing!

Will there be any more? I wish there is! Please write more, cant wait! :3
xXxhetalianekopopxXx chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
I like the other story "run ash run" a little better than this one. I don't know why I just do.
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