Reviews for The Demon's Apple
Lady Brookelle chapter 4 . 8/13/2014
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Autarkic chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Well, I can tell that this story has a lot of promise. :D There's a lot of room to add your OC's personality into the mix. However, there are a few technical bugs that need to be addressed, such as spelling and grammatical errors. :/

In response to your summary, a Beta Reader is someone who reads over your chapter prior to release to catch any of those technical errors. They also give you overall advice on the content, such as revising certain parts or suggesting an idea to enhance the plot.

While I am not an official Beta (yet), I'd like to help you on this project once I meet the requirements. If you are interested, please send me a PM and I'll respond ASAP. :)

Keep up the good work :)

~ Autarkic