|Reviews for Inevitability|
| Awakemysoullittlelionman17 chapter 15 . 12/4/2011
By golly , I am sooo behind in reviews..forgive me? This fix is marvelously amazing. Your writing is truly amazing and I love these fixes..alot :) Onward to another amazing fix :)
| cupcakelover0822 chapter 14 . 11/30/2011
Amazing Amazing Amazing I LOVE this story it is fantastic please update soon : )
| Elle Loves Glee chapter 16 . 11/29/2011
OMG i just re read these Asian F sections and for some insane reason i missed the part about there being another one the first time ! Really looking forward to it! I adore how amazingly awesome you write Jesse & Rachel!
| androgenius chapter 15 . 11/29/2011
SO, since I was so behind in reviews, I was totally considering just skipping hairography, and then you added in this little NOTE there to me that I just couldn't ignore! I AM HONORED THAT YOU'D THINK TO PUT SMUT IN JUST FOR ME! :D
"Not outside of West Virginia, anyway." - OH MY GOD LMFAO
"But Rachel...she was always like a simmering bed of coals just waiting to burst into flame." - that's so, so true. and the fire/ice comparison between rachel and quinn is so incredibly accurate
"You fumbled what was maybe the most important pass of your entire sorry life. I intercepted and scored." - OH JESSE. that was pure gold.
"They were a reminder of Jesse when he wasn't with her—they burned like a brand sunk deep into her skin, even when no one else could see them." - BRILLIANCE
Holy crap, the smut. HOLY CRAP. I CAN'T EVEN. I JUST CAN'T. THERE ARE NO WORDS. I APPROVE SO, SO MUCH OF THIS, YOU HAVE NO IDEA. and their banter at the end? perfection. :D
| erinsgirl chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
Hey! I realised there are a couple of these oneshots I haven't reviewed so naturally I have to go back and read them again and review.
I so wish this had actually happened. I loved how you resolved things by having Rachel point out to Finn that they weren't right for each other and that Finn was just trying to get her back because he was jealous which I firmly believe.
I thought Will and Jesse's convo was fantastic. Will would warn Jesse because he does try to look out for his kids and he does see the inappropriateness. Jesse is completely in character though with not giving a damn about anything Will says. It was gorgeous though how he cared about Rachel being ok with everything that happened.
Rachel was adorable as well with how she got embarrassed in some parts which were also totally in character. She's confident and brash but she's also reserved and proper. Her nervousness at the fact that she was completely inexperienced was completely realistic. The change between flirtatious and innocent was spot-on.
It was perfectly in character too for them both to keep relating to theatre terms for the situation.
It was hilarious how Jesse was the one freaking out about them having unprotected sex while Rachel was the calm, cool collected one when usually it’s the other way around. It was funny as well how Rachel stormed off and Jesse thought she was fantastic for it. So them!
The talk they had as well both before and after was so sweet as well and showed exactly how they’re so good together.
Fantastic story that completely hooked me on your stories.
| hayley30 chapter 16 . 11/22/2011
*dead from perfection*
i wanted to slap mercedes and finn so many times during this installment, and i practically cheered when michael cut mercedes down and when rachel slapped finn. so so so good. :)
the last section with rachel and jesse was awesome, i loved how you explained the way jesse hated the beating scene, how it wasn't just that he didn't want to hurt her physically; such a different take on it that i hadn't considered. :)
can't wait for the third part!
| hayley30 chapter 14 . 11/22/2011
okay, firstly, wow. that's the only way i can really describe this one-shot. it was *perfect*. i am such a huge fan of spring awakening and I have wanted to see a crossover like this for ages, and this one was just ugh so good i can't really express it in words. i loved reading the parts of the musical itself, it was such an interesting way to see the scenes in a different light. when rachel broke character to get jesse to properly hit her, fantastic. that scene in spring awakening is so intense as it is, but to see the characters struggle with it so candidly in your story was epic. there were so many sections that i was just flailing over, but i can't remember them specifically, sorry, just know that it was all amazing!
i've been working my way through the other stories as well, and i seriously love them all, especially the fix to Prom Night. :)
thank you for writing these amazing st berry fixes!
| northstar61 chapter 15 . 11/20/2011
You really have nailed Finn’s character here – naïve, clueless, yet with moments of sheer douchiness that make me want to slap him silly. His musing about how unpopular Rachel was, and thinking that he might be able to convince her to put out for him behind Quinn’s back because of it, was one of those.
Loved the way Jesse just strolled into Rachel’s bedroom as if he belonged there, completely confusing Finn and marking his territory without saying a word.
“smiling at him as if he had single-handedly invented musical theater” – Finn may have thought it, but it was still a perfect description of how Rachel’s face would light up at the sight of Jesse.
Jesse is definitely comfortable in his own body, something Finn has not yet managed. And he looks studly even while reading a ballet magazine because, well, he’s Jesse St. James – handsome, confident, and completely irresistible.
Trust Finn not to believe Rachel when she said she was acting – not just because he couldn’t legitimately tell the difference (she really is that good), but also because that explanation doesn’t jive with his fantasies. He wants her, and thinking that it’s mutual gives him the tacit permission (in his mind) to go after her.
Love the fact that Rachel was still angry at Finn for his part in getting her to quit Cabaret, and that she bluntly told him she was no longer interested. I adored Jesse verbally besting Finn, using large words guaranteed to confuse him. As for the double entendre? Priceless!
As for the smut? I’m with androgenius on that one. You write is *so* well, that we definitely don’t want any missed opportunities in that regard. ;) Thanks for yet another spectacular fix.
| michemistic chapter 17 . 11/15/2011
Now THAT’S what I’m talking about! The sweet little things like Jesse kissing her roaming hand and the cute quip about how, “There was a dark-haired angel in my arms. She'd stolen all the blankets, but her skin was so warm that it didn't matter. Ring any bells?" made it all the more enjoyable. Hehe, I’m sure they know that girls get colder faster than guys, especially girls as small as Rachel, not to worry because she has Jesse to keep her warm!
Once again a wild possessive Jesse appears! It seems we’ll have to settle on their Ohio bedrooms till they get an apartment of their own in NYC. Thank you again for the sex, "Christ, Rach," he murmured finally, releasing his furious grip and slipping out of her, "if I could wake up like that every morning..." Easy there tiger, we all want and need it too, but pace yourselves!
That, “the realization that it wasn't possible to wake up like this every morning. Not right now, anyway … She was still just a junior in high school, and she belonged with them, not Jesse. Not yet. "Jesse," she whispered, reaching for him even as he gathered her close to his chest, "please, don't" "Shh." He kissed her damp hair. "I know. I know." Well it’s a good thing he’s staying till Rachel graduates isn’t it? ;) And it’s a good thing these two are so good at sneaking around, Jesse is going to do some more Romeo/Tony moves like climbing to her bedroom window.
Aw no details on their shower? *pouts* And, “Jesse lounged on her bed and watched” he’s really good at that (Like A Virgin and your Hairography fix comes to mind).
"How is this a favor to you?" she teased, slipping her hand in his as he took her suitcase to carry it downstairs.
"Because the better you're feeling," he said with a roguish smile, "the more I can touch you without guilt."
"When it comes to you? Definitely."
Well aren’t we mischievous?
Oh and they’re definitely in post-coital afterglow. Having them wrapped around and all over each other, I have a weakness for couples feeding each other too. Thank you Santana for, “"Sleeping with teacher?" she said, raising a thoughtful eyebrow. "Now that's something I can get behind.”-I wholeheartedly concur. Teacher’s Pet indeed. Now that I think of it, this season St. Berry is BOTH, “sleeping with the enemy” of S1 and, “hot for teacher” of S2. Forbidden: you’re doing it right (that is if the writers take their heads out off their behinds and give us our OTP back).
I still find it hilarious that Britt questioned if Jesse and Will were related...and now I have a plotbunny where Jesse's uncle in Lima is Will (he’s not worthy enough to be papa St. James imho). Then Shelby and Will get married, so the first time Rachel and Jesse see each other they are step-cousins...wtf self? St. Berry already has more than enough forbidden romance in canon. *cough if you ever need an inappropriate AU St. Berry prompt, it's yours cough*
I mean Will's psychology of having no problem macking on a woman who is related/looks too much like one of his students (who had a crush on him). Well, Rachel had no qualms being with Jesse, who bares a resemblance to Will. But then again, Jesse DOES have better curls and taste in women.
The microphone bit, Jesse understands what it takes to be a choir leader, even if that includes some spy work. He did mention CSI undercover work in, "Dream On."
Thank you for this installment of your Prom fix! Can’t wait to see what you have next!
| Elle Loves Glee chapter 17 . 11/14/2011
YOU ARE AWESOME! Part 4! This chapter was just pure awesome, there is no other word for it! Especially after the last episode which i have no words for apart from eww eww and eww! Can't wait to see what you come up with next as i've no doubt it will be amazing!
| erinsgirl chapter 17 . 11/13/2011
Loved the sweet . Hot and adorable. Rachel admitting she had the choir room bugged and acting completely justified about it and Jesse's reaction were perfectly in-character.
I think I forgot to mention it in the last chapter but Jesse's reaction to what Rachel did to Sunshine was perfectly in character as well. I must admit while she would do something like that I think the writers made her go a little to far.
I'd have loved to see her apologise with something like "I went to fat. I'm sorry. Sending you to the boys locker room or an abandoned building would have proved my point just as well".
Loved Brittany's comments about Jesse's mom getting child support. Hilarious. Loved Santana's comments as well. She would support sleeping with a teacher. I get the feeling that even though she hates him she'd still sleep with Jesse if only because he's hot and the reactions from everyone else.
Fabulous as always.
| kitcatofthenight chapter 15 . 11/12/2011
Do more like this! Or like Asian F. They are among my top favorites.
| MissRe chapter 17 . 11/12/2011
This was adorable! I really enjoyed seeing Rachel and Jesse together and happy. I got a kick out of Santana changing her tune when Jesse would be teacher instead of enemy. Cracked me up! I loved the two of them together - it made me happy after a really long day at work! Awesome job.
| BriyerRose chapter 17 . 11/12/2011
Loved the chapter and would love to see a 5th part where Jesse does become a consultant and how badly Finn and Quinn react! I know that in the 1st chapter you sort of have him as one but that is set in New York and not in this plot line! Pretty please with a cherry on top! ;-)
Thanks for getting us through the Finchel sex; though I am glad that we didn't have to see Finn anywhere unclothed or the actual act in progress! Thank goodness for small favors!
Please update again soon!
| A Smiling Cat chapter 17 . 11/12/2011
So much for a "Prom Queen fix" one-shot, but who's complaining ? Certainly not me
Rachel and Jesse are so cute together ! (Yeah, I know, hardly a surprise anymore... But it doesn't hurt to say it - again)
Them ignoring Finn and seeing Santana and Brittany was fun !
And the end with "I had the choir room bugged" ... They really are perfect for each other.
(And I'm sure it's great motivation for fanfiction authors, but I'm not sure I can take much more Finchel canon sex...)
(I can read many more St Berry fics, though ... Just saying 0:-) )