Reviews for Inevitability
MezMaroon8 chapter 4 . 7/31/2011
I love this so much, love the drama, the tension, the dialogue and you have the chracters down so well too. Great story
AlexisLovesGlee chapter 4 . 7/25/2011
Have I ever told you how much I love your oneshots? :) Especially this one. I love seeing happy Jesse and Rachel in the future, and I loved the Klaine moments.

My only issue is the baby's name. I loved that they named her after Grace Kelly and Judy Garland, but Judy is Quinn's mom's name. I love the nickname "Gracie," though!
kbraven52 chapter 4 . 7/24/2011
Oh my god, this was about the cutest thing I've ever read. The image of Jesse holding his newborn daughter was so precious. And the involvement of Kurt and Blaine was perfect. I loved how freaked out Kurt was and how Blaine was so curious :D

Amazing! Thanks for writing!
LaurenBrogs89 chapter 4 . 7/24/2011
Oh i love this! You do fluff just as well as you do angst. I am in awe of your ability to udpate twice in a week with two different stories. My last update was a month ago! If you update Kindheit in the next few days i may explode from excitement!

Definately my favourite author xxxxx
Maria das Quimeras chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
There are many stories out there with babies, births, stuff like that, but this one-shot is by far the best I ever read. I think it's because it's realistic and detailed, there isn't just the hand holding and afterward bliss... You actually use this happening (I mean the hours of labour) to create a plot around it, which is something I had yet to read. Love how Jesse's parents are mentioned; the touch of humor is great and Blaine and Kurt's side blended amazingly well. It became one of my favorite one shots ever, this must be the fourth time I read it )
northstar61 chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
I'm not generally the biggest fan of baby fics, but as with everything you write, this was beautifully done. Trust Rachel not to want to disturb Jesse during his performance, and trust Blaine and Kurt to realize how much she really wanted and needed him with her.

Loved Kurt's reactions to everything. I can totally picture him being that squeamish about the birthing process, while Blaine would be fascinated. The friendship between the foursome was lovely to read. And Kurt's teasing about Gracie becoming an accountant was priceless.

I enjoyed the background details you included in this, such as Jesse's parents not liking Rachel, her dad being as uncomfortable as Kurt with watching an actual birth, the still tenuous relationship with Shelby, and even the revisiting of Jesse's long-ago choices. I could certainly imagine that being something Rachel would throw in his face when they fight!

the sight of Jesse holding his newborn daughter took his breath away

I'm pretty sure it would take mine away, too. I'm having visions of a shirtless Jesse with a tiny baby sleeping on his chest...

With your Kurt/Rachel fic, it could end up like a re-visitation, but it could also veer off into another direction if you decided to draw parallels to Shelby's surrogacy for Rachel's dads, and if you explored some of that. Of course, that might make it an entirely different story than what you originally intended.
kezztip chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
What a lovely treat, a new chapter so soon after the last. Loved it, of course. Especially the bit about their child becoming an accountant. Well done.
EmZ711 chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
Aww! That was adorable! ;)
GinaG Lewis chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
I love your 'fixes'! They are so well written and for being AU, completely believable. The future one was particularly lovely but I really enjoyed them all. Seriously, they are such high quality, quite a rare thing unfortunately. I really hope you write some more, I love how you capture Rachel and Jesse.

On your authors note, I'm not sure about the surrogate fic, I don't know, it just doesn't sit right with me that Rachel would do that, maybe because of what she's gone through with Shelby. I've just never liked that idea. However, if you decide to write it, I will probably read it because I love your writing and I'm sure it will be amazing. It's just not something I really like the idea of. Thanks for a great story! Hope you write more soon.
auhaes23 chapter 3 . 7/21/2011
This chapter is great too !
auhaes23 chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
This story was so beautiful. I was hoping that someday someone will post a post a story when Rachel give born. And that was so ... incredible ! Just perfect, that's just what I imagined !
ladylookslikeadude chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
Aw! I feel special! But no, seriously, this was sweet, I loved it, and, well, yeah. It was just adorable, and I loved the Klaine aspect of it too. So yeah, complete epicness on this one. :)
Potato Maiden chapter 4 . 7/21/2011
1) I love all the fixes you're doing.

2) This chapter was too cute, I love it.
kbraven52 chapter 3 . 7/21/2011
Oh, how I wish that this actually happened on the show. I imagine Jesse as the only person understanding Rachel's fear of losing her voice and I hate that we didn't get to see him comforting her. This was perfect :)
kezztiphotmail.com chapter 3 . 7/21/2011
Loved it as always. You have there two perfectly in character. Excellent work.
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