|Reviews for Inevitability|
| Saulzy chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
so uh yeah you should have written the last episode of glee since they TOTALLY ruined it. sighh poor jesse. stupid finn. this is how it should have ended.
| Talulah Carmichael chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
This was quite good, I just have one small issue with it...when Rachel's in Jesse's room on her laptop and Mr. Schuester knocks on the door and sees her, she greets him, but then after he talks with Jesse in the hall and Jesse comes back into the room, she asks who was at the door like she never saw him.
| Nicole chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
This is wonderful! The conversation between Mr. Schuester and Jesse is too perfect for words. They've always had such brief interactions on the show, but the dynamic always interests me. I love that addition to your story, as well as Jesse's "she has no faults" line. This is so honest and beautifully done. One of my favorite St. Berry fics, by far.
| Lcrazemag chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
This was awesome! Your characterization of Jesse was so sweet haha. I hope this is what canon Jesse would be like with Rachel because I would totally prefer this over Finchel. :P
| Faith chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Loved it! I love all the season finale "fixes" but I admit this is one of my faves. Thanks for writing it!
| brikaspoms chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I think I love you, lol! THANK YOU for fixing the disaster that was S2...write more anytime!
| lexchloe1013 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
This was one of the best St. Berry fics I've read...I think you did the relationship justice and I really wish things had turned out this way. You write both Jesse and Rachel so well and I really wish this could have happened. Plus, you rock with the sex scenes...tasteful yet romantic and sexy. Please consider writing more...I would happily read it! Nicely done!
| mrs.Franny.Robinson chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
This is, quite possibly, the best St Berry fic i've ever read.
It was honest, passionate and the sex scene was tastefull (rather than just a quiky on the spur of the moment!)
keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more St Berry wonders from you ;)
| BriyerRose chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
Loved everything! Great job!:-)
| Marie chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I Liked It A Lot and I Hope You Do Another Part 2 This I Loved It Good Job
| Elle Loves Glee chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I love this! This is how i would have preferred the final episode to go instead of the mess that ended up showing on screen, i mean seriously what the hell was that? Sorry rant over. I love the way you wrote Jesse and Rachel and how their relationship progressed physically and yeah i meant the smut lol. I hope you consider writing more of the fab St Berry coupling. All in all a truly wonderful story. Elle X
| LaurenBrogs89 chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
never stop writing smut! this was both hot and sweet and in my mind this is what actually happened in the episode! xxxx
| Ellevazi chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
THIS is how the finale should've gone :]
| Monisse chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
This was brilliantly written! it was everything and then some more that should have happened in the actual episode. It was fun and passionate at the same time. Also, the sex scene was written with a lot of class!
I hope you write some more in the future.
| kezztip chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
OK, this is now my favourite AU story of the finale. I so wanted her to choose Jesse - it is literally unbelievable that she would choose Finn after the way he treated her, and I'm not just talking about when they were broken up. This version was so beautiful and just... inevitable. This is so what should have happened, in fact, this is what DID happen! At least that's what I choose to believe. Well done.