|Reviews for An alternate universe! ity?|
| candra chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
i think rick uses Mayall (his real name) as his characters name
| I AM ONSLAUGHT chapter 5 . 7/5/2012
haha pretty awesome, keep it going.
| Moonphase chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
So true, that bit about the sun.
For a first fic you've done well.
My only criticism (and it's constructive) would be to change how you paragraph, they're a bit all over the place at the moment which makes it hard to read.
I am atrocious about making stupid little spelling errors and with grammar rules, so I use a beta. I advise you, if possible, get a beta who will give you some advice and will double check your work.
| sheelanagig chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
I adore this story, it's one of my favourites already.
I hope you update soon!