|Reviews for One Day You Will Be like Me|
| fukuji mihoko chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
This story was a little disjointed, and kind of difficult for me to understand the whole time... -sweatdrop-
But you do a really good job of showing how much pain Charlotte was in, and I really feel sorry for her ;A;
| ChiptuneImpulse chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Since this won't be getting a second chapter...Thanks Drafter!
To be honest its only the second/third time writing in this style.
Normally I do linear but lately I've been wanting to do close disjointedness-if that makes some sense...- Anyways if you want to compare the time here to my other story, "Just Desserts" and see if it's strong or not, I'd appreciate it! -Shameless Plug! :D-
Thanks again for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
| J the Drafter chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
This is pretty good, though the stream of consciousness style makes it harder to understand when things are happening. You did give a pretty decent look at Charlotte's former and current life, though I think the story could have been stronger if the chronology hadn't been so confused.