|Reviews for If Only|
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/18
Please write more !
| LoveTheSeries chapter 9 . 10/12/2013
Can we have more?
| Sallyp99 chapter 9 . 10/6/2013
Eeeeek! Loved it! Please write more soon! :)
| Guest chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
I wised you had continued I love your story
| Lauren chapter 9 . 12/6/2012
WOW, I am loving this, please update it more often!
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/31/2012
| Zarsla chapter 9 . 7/18/2012
That is all.
| Avidreader1996ash chapter 9 . 1/21/2012
It's good! However one small thing, it's a little impossible that Sephy wouldn't see her father for 9 months and knowing Kamal Hadley, he would double check the truth of her words... Apart from that, I enjoyed reading it... Please update, I want to find out what happens when Callum comes out...
| queenantonia789 chapter 9 . 1/16/2012
i love this!
please update soon ;)
| antonia789 chapter 9 . 1/14/2012
please wright more its so much better than the real end
| REALLY GOOD chapter 9 . 11/30/2011
Really good i read the first one by chance and i have carried on! maybe jude could come back and blackmail sephy because her knows about callie rose! just a thought
| laoiser chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
it's more in character than i would have expected of an ending where Callum lived in regard to Kamal, but i still think it's unrealistic and Sephy would not have given in to her father so easily. She is too stubborn and would not give her baby's life no matter how much she loved Callum. it's a good idea but i also dont see why everyone is under the impression that a different ending to this book must be the survival of Callum.
| Christine89 chapter 9 . 11/11/2011
Hi! I really like your story. I hope you still decide to continue it. I see its been a few months since a last update.
| anono11 chapter 9 . 7/26/2011
I really like your story, it's realistic and thoughtful- keep writing! :)
| LyricsArePoetry chapter 9 . 7/24/2011
There was a moment in this chapter when you went into third person, but apart form that it was great. Love the idea of the death penalty being made illegal