Reviews for Harry Potter: The Forgotten Brother
cantstopreadingfanfictions chapter 13 . 11/4/2014
loved the dementor scene...you write well...I cant wait to read your other fanfics after this one...
and I had a feeling harry would join them in the fight when I realized that voldemort was talking about attacking them somewhere in the start of longbottom manor scene...
cantstopreadingfanfictions chapter 11 . 11/4/2014
I KNEW IT! I kinda guessed that Hermione's master is harry...it couldn't have been Voldemort because of her blood status...and harry couldn't have been just sitting all those years doing nothing...I just wasn't sure whether they were on the side of light or dark in chapter 5...but now I am guessing its light...
cantstopreadingfanfictions chapter 2 . 11/3/2014
oh my god...it is so annoying to hear that no one bloody remembers harry! he was a student for gods sake!
I am loving what I have read so far...I hope it keeps me captivated...
moving on to the next chapter now...
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 19 . 10/19/2014
I just find it ironic that people got up in arms about 'Murica being insulted... whether it was magical society or not. Doesn't that say something at all...? compensating for something...? perhaps propaganda also...?
And geez, even the muggle society can be really screwed up, yknow... not everyone has running water, a safe warm place to sleep at night, and knows where their next meal is coming from (or can afford healthier foods), even in "good ol' america". It's not just the "foreign 3rd world countries" that have issues, people. gah.
Aahh, idiots...
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 18 . 10/19/2014
Pppft. Harry attempting to create a harem... FOILED! Hermione says no! hahahaha
OOohhhh! "Hey, ugly" is what annabeth says to the hyperborean giant in The Last Olympian, isn't it!? hahaha
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 17 . 10/19/2014
Sooo, stealing it from the grave counts as defeating him? I guess since he's one of the masterminds, it kind of indirectly counts... but the magic is more direct than that, isn't it? I mean, Voldy was the mastermind for Draco, but Draco still got the wand sorta in canon.
Aahhh, but Lily and Harry are evillllllll-! hahaha! (not really, but YEAH REALLY! xD) ahhh, poor snape- that was just cruel, even if he was a nasty bastard... O.o xD
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 14 . 10/19/2014
And does voldy even know his horcruxes are gone...? O.o
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 15 . 10/19/2014
Well, it was an awful lot of explanation, but it did make sense I think... O.O
Soooooo he didn;t exist in the first place? ...well. o.O
And... wasn't Draco at Harry's meeting or something? from earlier? I dunno, maybe i misread. xD but heh, one more blow against voldy!
The only thing is that those death eaters must've been really unskilled for all of them to get killed- and there were like 100 of them, right? O.o hnn.
Well, still an interesting story... I wonder if voldy will freak out and help with lowering his own numbers? haha
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 11 . 10/19/2014
...Soooo. Harry keeps bodies in his basement. xD hahaha
Well, snape is screwed. And so is dumbledope! heehee :P
Well, I wonder how this is gonna turn out! :D
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 8 . 10/19/2014
Hahahahahahaha! Aaahh, wizards... "upper thigh area" my arse. (Snape's arse!) hahaheeheeheehaha! xD
I really wonder what the deal is with hermione though!? what's up!? and luna- when's she gonna show up!? and is it Harry!? xD
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 5 . 10/19/2014
WHOOOOAHHH
sooo, is he voldy, or is he another group...!? a third party!? whaoooooo!
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 4 . 10/19/2014
Ohoooooo-! but... is it a plot twist...!? a double plot twist!? is it a dark mark, or Harry's mark of some sort!? wooooooaaaahhhh!
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 1 . 10/19/2014
Oooh- I really wanna know what happens! what's with harry's scores dropping? why can't dumbles remember him? oooooh! interesting start. :P
Guest chapter 11 . 10/16/2014
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MSgt SilverDollar and Snake chapter 30 . 10/9/2014
Great story. A couple of thing you might want to keep in mind is that no matter how good you are you can't please everyone so you're better off not trying. You can't let poor reviews bother you as that's all some people seem to know how to do.
If you get a review like I did ( It reads: Okay, her is the new one: I HATE YOUR GUTS! How could you subscribe such shitty story!? If you don't know that story will met fanfiction standards, don't write her! For fuck sake, man, chill out and find beta or two, really.) do what I did and answer with the words PISS OFF. If I lose that type reader I've lost nothing and don't have to put up with their bull crap.

Just keep on writing for yourself until you get like me old an gray and stove up.
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