|Reviews for Rumors and a Sapphire|
| BenoitRen chapter 1 . 6/5/2011
I wondered if Mieu really needed claws because she has superhuman strength in your universe. As for the fight itself, nothing stands out. It's pretty standard (the good kind) to me.
Just like with the previous story, you weaved the flashback into the thoughts of the character the story focuses on. I like that.
I think you captured Lyle well. I was picturing his smirks as I read.