Reviews for The Knight and the Swan
Guest chapter 26 . 7/25/2016
I love this story and check back often to see if more chapters have been written. Please if you get the chance could you add to the story, please..
Guest chapter 26 . 5/9/2016
Please more! I need more! Excellent story! Love!
lola74 chapter 26 . 2/14/2016
Please finish your story. ...
Jennifer61403 chapter 26 . 10/27/2015
Thank you for the update. Please update again soon.
anonymous chapter 26 . 9/27/2015
pls update soon
Bright.Eye.July chapter 26 . 9/24/2015
please update soon I would love to know when these too will over come there differences and realise there feelings for each other, I really like this story you are such a great writer :)
xoASHLEYxo chapter 26 . 9/11/2015
Please update soon I love this story line that your doing. This is the second time I read the story over while waiting for the next chapter. Please update soon. Thank you :)
Harrypotterwannabe00 chapter 26 . 9/10/2015
Please uodate
jk chapter 13 . 8/24/2015
funny how he said that he would be with other women but she belongs to him and him alone..i hope bella finds some nice pieces on the side too!
jk chapter 6 . 8/24/2015
of course she doesn't even care about what he doing when she met him..she wants to kiss him forever..LOL is this one of those hes a complete douche bag but has a magical touch which no other man possesses story?
I fucking hate those
jk chapter 5 . 8/24/2015
please no one married for love back then...if she has a male best friend she would be lucky to marry him, shit she should be pushing for it so shes not married to some nasty old man with shit breath.
You would put Edward the used up whore over Jacob?
He probably has stds...and AND hes 27! hes been using the pull out method with all his whores...I cant even imagine how many kids he has.
I bet it burns when he pees
jk chapter 4 . 8/24/2015
I really don't give a shit if he actually likes the girls he that makes it ok cause he doesn't like makes it much worse actually! He just uses woman, lusts after them like the sick whore he is
jk chapter 3 . 8/24/2015
you seriously have bella meet Edward while hes fucking lauran? seriously? great only chapter three and I already hate Edward...only a nasty used up man whore would fuck lauran
jk chapter 1 . 8/24/2015
obviously its not ok in our time to give you daughter away for marriage...and expecially not until shes at least 18 but your writing a story about 100's of years ago. Girls were considered woman at like 14 and usually married off very early. So I find it strange that you have bella thinking shes a adult at 18 and that she will be given more freedom just because of those times females didn't have freedom the man of the house made the decisions always. I feel like you didn't do any research into the period your writing about and it makes your story...hard to read
oneworld16 chapter 26 . 6/30/2015
Please don't stop it's getting so good I can hardly stand it
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