Reviews for What If?
SlvrCat145 chapter 1 . 1/24
I'm so jealous... Unwind as required reading. Your school has good taste! Very good oneshot!
Zelee5465 chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
We had to read the book for school as well :)
I thought the way you wrote that was great and his father totally deserved that punch in the gut... And I noticed that you used a direct quote for the story, I would've said something similar if that had happened to me
xxBurningxx chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
Wow. Hehe, I just finished rereading Unwind for, like, the fifth time a couple of days ago. I deserve a cookie, I noticed the quote directly!

Good job, anyway, in character and well written! Love it. First Unwind fic going into my list of favorites! Good for you.

A Pleased Reader,

xxBurningxx
Ashlight11 chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
That was really good! Can't believe that you don't have many reveiws yet. I haven't read Unwind in forever, and before i start my fic for it, i guess i should go to say, I don't get a cookie, do I? Whatever DxD. You had Connor just right, while he was still whole I mean. Amazing writing, no mistakes that I could spot!

-Ashy *.*
QueenCobraWing chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
Ooh I liked this. Poor Connor.

So, how does one recieve a virtual cookie? Because I'll be expecting one :)
VanessaTemple chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Wow, this was really good, keep it up :)

...poor Connor :p