Reviews for Complicated
MadHattess chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Perhaps we have all made a try at this theme, but some of us have done better than others. For example, I'm kind of glad that my version is buried in the obscurity of LJ... .

Lots of good musings here. I particularly liked the ones about Haruka (who *did* have to do the work of the president despite losing for it), and Mikoto (who is a lot more interesting and 'complicated' than many people give her credit for). Also, Shizuru's line: "...I didn't remember what would happen next, but only my intent in that instant..." was very effective.

Lastly, good solid end line. I always envy that.
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