Reviews for What Once Was Lost
WolFang1011 chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
Well, that was only expected, really. I always thought Seranni would end up that way. Reading about it made me wish a different ending for her. And that thought in itself shows that you've succeeded with this story. 'Twas well written, and I enjoyed it. Don't think there's anything to warrant the M rating, but I suppose staying on the safe side is always preferable.
Washed Clean chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
Excellent work. The sex was vague enough to be interesting, and the rest was cute and emotionally engaging.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
That was cute, if a little bit depressing. Nice work!
Billini chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
Very emotional, as always. I really like your writing style :-)
mutive chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Oooh, yes, I saw this on the kmeme and loved it. And I love it here, too. It's so very sweet and sad. Velanna's love for her sister is one of her most redeeming qualities.
Wolfox6 chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Haunting...and powerful. I always felt great sorrow for Velanna at her denial of what her sister was obviously becoming, and you wrote of the experience so very well.

Wonderfully done.
maricsblade chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Good, suspenseful story and very well written! Hope you'll write more DA stuff.