Reviews for Daily routine
El' Caliente chapter 6 . 8/23/2011
sweet chapter fun to read lots of drama and excitment great job plz update soon;D
Stormysongbird chapter 6 . 8/22/2011
I really liked this update. Everything went very well together and I loved the way you characterized Quinn. That virus sounds nasty. Keep it up.

wisdom-jewel chapter 6 . 8/22/2011
Very interesting, I wonder what would happen next
fujoshifanGRL93 chapter 5 . 8/4/2011
Great chapter, I really like Semali's power and the fight scenes were really good.
El' Caliente chapter 5 . 8/4/2011
ElusiveExile chapter 5 . 8/4/2011
This was a really good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

-Payton :)
wisdom-jewel chapter 5 . 8/4/2011
Huh, I wonder how they going get through this. Can't wait for the next chapter.
sly sylvester not logged in chapter 4 . 7/28/2011
Candace North

age 17

the studious know it all

light brown shoulder length hair pulled into a tight bun with long bangs

golden brown sparkled eyes

light skin with frekles

thin tall athletic build

power is she can create doubles/copies of herself each is 10 times stronger than the average man
ElusiveExile chapter 4 . 7/28/2011
So I just found this story, and I think it's pretty interseting! You're a very good writer. And I'm going to guess the nightmare man is Mister Sinister. If you're still accepting OC's, I'd make a character for you, just send me the form. I hope you update soon.

Sweet In September chapter 4 . 7/27/2011
September Opall

age 16

peach cream skin

emerald eyes

very long blood red hair

thin small athletic

her power is COMPLETE control over the enviorment/animals/earth/plants and healing powers

September is laid back and chill with a good sense of humor, all for peace and loving the refuses to eat animals, NOT gonna happen ever. all about being ego friendly and loving this earth wants people to realize all the problems through song because thats one of the easiest ways. She loves animals and nature and always tries to keep the peace, impulsive and never thinks before acting she is a very much of a girly girl feminist and dedicated and carfree She's really kind and friendly, and get's very exicted very easily. She trusts people a lot, but isn't trusted in turn most of the time, as she can be a bit of a gossiper but She is trustworthy and has a vibe that you can't help but wanna trust Looks on the positive side of life. To complainers, she says, "Life is hard, and then we die. So stop complaining!" though a exetingly beautiful girl she hates it when men are sexist, and she can do anything boys do- skateboarding, metalworking, you name it if she sets her mind to it she will do it even if it takes her a while to do is a group she perfers hanging out with the guys as she tends to be one of the guys.

(not logged in srry!)
Not yet 13 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Love this story i think i will send in a oc of my own:

-Ivy Lust

age 15

african american

smoldering amber eyes

dark mocca skin

dark brown pixi cut with auburn highlights

slender 5'2 105 pnds

Ivy is the comic relief of the evil side she is slightly sadistic dark humor she loves a good joke though she is bad she has a sence of honor only held for friends and teamates she is a goth apperace to her but acts nothing like a goth!

Ivy's power:control over the shadows and darkness it makes her a great spy she loves using her powers for bad
undescoverd potential chapter 4 . 7/27/2011
Name: Love Hartfelt

Code name: hypno hart

Nationality: Caucasian

Skin: porclin pale

Eyes: half lidded bright baby blue eyes

Gender: female


Top: white hart decorated silky off thr shoulder top

Bottom: light pink knee thigh length skirt

Shoes: white dress shoes

Accessories: hart shapped neckless

Power: She has control over liquid and water she has the ability to turn into a mermaide and she can create illusions an of hypnotic harts than can hypnotise her foe hypnotising them to be under her command she can also heal people

Hobbies: shopping decorating dancing hanging out with friends

Things you forgot to list:

Hair: She has long wavy auburn hair that reaches her mid back and long bangs that fall into her eyes

Personality:she is the ultimate girly girl she is sensitive emotional sweet like sugar she is a flirty fiesty pacifict angelic the gorl next door type she is a huge pacifict soft spoken and fiercely loyal doesnt have a much of a temper but if provoked hard enough look out she can creat a tsunomi and can be scary but mainly a sweet soul:D

Name: Silver Belle

Code name: Illusionist

Nationality: white

Personality: Silver Belle is a very sweet girl...when she wants to be. But, she acts like a child. She whines and pouts when she doesn't get what she wants and she squeals and giggles when she does. She gets excited over the littlest things. She's easily distracted and amazed. She's easily scared and manipulated, but when she wants to be, she can be very manipulative. She's not ditsy, she just acts very young and naive. She's used to getting what she wants and HATES losing. She will go into a fit of anger and is not fun when she is provoked. She will do ANYTHING to get to the top, even things she's not proud of. But, in the end, if she gets what she wants, she doesn't regret a thing

Hair Color: Light blonde hair

Style: Two long pigtails that reach her mid waist on either side of her head

Skin Tone: Pale, but it compliments her eyes

Eye Color: Hazel...they're big and child-like

Other: She's skinny, but she LOVES to eat...she's ALWAYS eating something

Everyday wear: A pink shirt that says in silver cursive letters 'Squeeze me' with a teddy bear, white skinny jeans and pink flip flops

Formal: A pink dress with a white belt in the middle with her pink flip flops (Her hair would be up with a silver bow tying her hair up)

Swim wear: A pink bikini

Pjs: White sweat pants with a pink T-shirt with a sleeping teddy bear

History: Silver Belle's mother died when she was born, so her father had to take care of her. Being a rich, single parent, he decided it would be best to give her anything she wanted when she wanted it. She and her father don't get alongvery well. He tries to avoid her as much as possible while she tries to build a relationship, but she is ALWAYS turned down

Likes: Getting her way, toys, accessories, her father and her money

Dislikes: Losing

Age: 13

Power: Sublimination, empity, and illusions

Name: Bubba Addams

Code name: Bounce

Nationality: white

Skin: light tanned pink chubby cheeks he also has braces and blue rimmed oversized glasses

Eyes:colbalt blue

Hair:curly honey blonde hair

Gender: Male

Age: 10

Top: blue teeshirt yellow smily face and white undershirt

Bottom: tan shorts

Power: he had rubber band like powers can bounce making him almost inpenitrible(heat is weekness) and has super speed

do u want his personlity? ill put it anyways:he is a hyper active friendly peppy slightly dim but sweet innocent boy always has a smile on his round face he is a chubby small boy very nieve and doesnt think bad thoughts he lives in his own world where nothin can harm him!

hope u like them!
Sexxy Malfoy chapter 4 . 7/27/2011
Name: Ashlee Vortex

Code name: Prodigy

Nationality: Caucasian

Facial features:oval shapped


Hair colour:dark golden blonde

Hair length:shoulder length

Hair style:curls

Eye colour:piercing Icey colbalt blue

Eye shape:half lidded

Eye size:regular shapped

Ear size:small

Skin tone:light tan

Body type:small petite cute


Weight:74 pnds

Lip shape:pouty full lips

Career aspirations (if any):to take over the world become a dictator or somethig

Strengths (like, what are they good at?):hacking into computers!

Pink sundresss black dress shoues white underdress

Mutant Name/Nickname:Prodigy


Personality: She is... Evil. she may only be nine, but has literally has the mind of a genius. The only problem... is that she's a evil genius. You might laugh, but you won't be laughing when she rips your homework and has you take the blame. You won't laugh when she shreds your fathers important work papers and have the dog be blamed. she really has no remorse for anything she does. The thing is though, is that she's SMART. she puts on this adorable little girl act that EVERYONE falls for. To everyone around her, she seems like the most darling nine year old ever. But when you aren't looking she'll make your life hell. And every single time she'll single someone out to take the blame. When she's alone, she tends to get conceited about her evil deeds, but she knows how to pull off that cute little girl act to the teee. she may bee the youngest but she has great potential and is a danger! She keeps friends close but enemies closer. She might be a little childish at times, but always acts mature for her age. She will fight, yell and get defensive if you call her a "cute little girl". However, she isn't above acting like one if it helps her get what she is the definition of a child genius. She has the resources and mind power to hack into any computer in the world, or basically do anything else she wants. She's not really a physical fighter, but if pressed she has a wicked punch- and aims for the knees or groin resorseful and cunning super antagonistic and manipulating she will put on her cute innocent child like charm to get her ways but she will sell you out in a hearbeat she is a devil in desguise!

Personal biography?:She is the only daughter to wealthy tycoons; a spoiled little brat and was not raised by her parents, but their live-in staff (She is their boss-she commands them, not the other way around). she skipped 5 grades and is a freshman in highschool becouse she has genius IQ level Stereotype:Evil Genius Prodegy Child

Powers:Puppetry- she can create Invisible strings of energy which she can attach to people's arms and legs, and then she can control their movements. People are still under their own minds but they cannot control their movements or powers, Gyrokinesis. She controls gravity. She can make ligh objects haevy and vice versa, attract or repel objects by surrounding them in an anti-gravity field, reduce her gravitational field to allow herself to "fly", crush an object by surrounding it in a gravity field, generate miniature black holes, attract objects in a telekinetic matter and create a gravitational force-field Photographic memory, along with Multilingualism. She can also feel presences in a room, so she can 'see' (so to speak) where everyone is and their exact location; so those with invisibility or what not would have a hard time concealing from her, those with super speed would just make her dizzy. She can feel through walls or vibrations through floors/Earth's surface for other presences, but she is limited on distance, which with training can be expanded. If she can also make a mind connection with the other presence (animal or human) and depending on the distance, she could use this mind link as a sort of tracking device... She also had the abilty to cancel out other mutants powers!
El' Caliente chapter 4 . 7/27/2011
sweet cant wait till the next chapter:D
MissAnnThropee chapter 4 . 7/27/2011
Ok, the thing about having a bitchy character(which is fine!) is that you need to have the people around her react to her as if she was a total bitch! Semali gets away with to much.
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