Reviews for Bath Time
COBRASTEVE chapter 1 . 6/13
Ha! This was great! Kei finally gets to be with Bell!
Staticy Fox Atra chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
That was hilarious. I think the funniest part to me was when Beldandy messed up several systems from rather being to powerful or her lover being that damn good. XD
Fenris-Wolf125 chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
I like it. Good job.

Minor nitpick:
"Ordinance" refers to a piece of legislation.

"Ordnance" is artillery and bombs. I'm in the military, trust me on this one.

Skuld is frequently laden with ordnance, not ordinances.
Angelalex242 chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Seriously, the best one shot I've seen so far on the site. Well done, well done.

This is totally how the manga should end. ;)
zeroIQ chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
I loved this. Both funny and also serious at times when you talk about Keiichi's situation. Definitely worth reading.
Dark Lord Daishi chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Simply Awesome and Hilarious!
during "that" month it must of been stormy skies 24/7 XD
Garoozis chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Love these characters from the first episode I watch great oneshot
Sim-Sim2 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Nice and funny story. Thank you!
Haos Claw chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Great story. I hope you add more to it.
IdiAmeanDada chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Love this story. Excellent work.
RealmOfDawn chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Hi! I absolutely loved this story! It was amazing! So funny and well written. You should write more of these(I haven't checked if you already have) But anyways, great job!
magicspromise89 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
This was a really cute story. I liked it a lot.
magicspromise89 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
This was a really cute story. I liked it a lot.
PhinalPhantasy chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Wonderful job on this fic. I enjoyed every moment of it
Magus Neon chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
This is way to good a story to remain a one shot. Continue please.

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