Reviews for Bath Time
Staticy Fox Atra chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
That was hilarious. I think the funniest part to me was when Beldandy messed up several systems from rather being to powerful or her lover being that damn good. XD
Fenris-Wolf125 chapter 1 . 8/18/2014
I like it. Good job.

Minor nitpick:
"Ordinance" refers to a piece of legislation.

"Ordnance" is artillery and bombs. I'm in the military, trust me on this one.

Skuld is frequently laden with ordnance, not ordinances.
Angelalex242 chapter 1 . 4/17/2014
Seriously, the best one shot I've seen so far on the site. Well done, well done.

This is totally how the manga should end. ;)
zeroIQ chapter 1 . 3/29/2014
I loved this. Both funny and also serious at times when you talk about Keiichi's situation. Definitely worth reading.
Dark Lord Daishi chapter 1 . 1/17/2014
Simply Awesome and Hilarious!
during "that" month it must of been stormy skies 24/7 XD
Garoozis chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Love these characters from the first episode I watch great oneshot
Sim-Sim2 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
Nice and funny story. Thank you!
Haos Claw chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Great story. I hope you add more to it.
IdiAmeanDada chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
Love this story. Excellent work.
RealmOfDawn chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Hi! I absolutely loved this story! It was amazing! So funny and well written. You should write more of these(I haven't checked if you already have) But anyways, great job!
magicspromise89 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
This was a really cute story. I liked it a lot.
magicspromise89 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
This was a really cute story. I liked it a lot.
PhinalPhantasy chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Wonderful job on this fic. I enjoyed every moment of it
Magus Neon chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
This is way to good a story to remain a one shot. Continue please.

Zenith010, Servant of Chaos
dragonboy101 chapter 1 . 2/20/2012
Dragonboy: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA That was hilarious. Razakel(my oc) and I had a wonderful laugh about this oneshot.

Razakel: I must say, it was interesting. *starts snickering and bursts out laughing* Who am I kiding, I've never laughed so hard in my life. "The gossip was already flying around Heaven, wondering if the problem was just due to Belldandy being so powerful, or if her mortal lover was just that damn good." Oh, Ormazd, I cracked up at that part.

Dragonboy: We hope to see more like this from you. Instant subscribe and favorite.
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