Reviews for Duty's End
Kartos chapter 36 . 8/12
I know this wasn't marked as done but I am soooo invested in all these characters and dying for more. It makes sense for them to stay on Simestria, but there's still a billion things to do unless Haggar is able to get them tons of troops, or Allura agrees to a marriage alliancr and agrees to a ton of troops (which i doubt they even have, but also she already suggested helping with Voltron...). It all seems ripe for a shoe to drop. Maybr Zarkon leaving Doom to head up the attack himself and having Doom taken out from under him? heeehehehehe
Kartos chapter 25 . 8/11
I love everything you write about Ryder and his priestess.
Vanessa Masters chapter 32 . 1/31/2017
Oh dear, Ryder is bitter he didn't get nookie. But just as well, Alexandrite might be better for Ryder then just for sex. I think he'll learn.
Vanessa Masters chapter 36 . 10/18/2015
Oh, I sorely hope there's a update, I love this!

And Ryder, the little side story with him is wonderful, and then there's mara.

Must. have. More.
Vanessa Masters chapter 35 . 10/18/2015
Wondering jsut now, if Haggar has a soft spot for Lotor? Or if she'd been a victim of Zarkon's abuse like the others?
Vanessa Masters chapter 34 . 10/18/2015
LOL

Boy, imagine if Mara makes a move on Keith and his 'lovingly cover backside.' XD

Allura: Don't do that with my face, goodness!
Vanessa Masters chapter 33 . 10/18/2015
Oh yes, Allura learns more. And It's really changing her perception, and it just makes her wish so vehemently to change it all for the better.
Vanessa Masters chapter 31 . 10/18/2015
God, Allura, first time on the surface and THAT happens?

Terrible.
Vanessa Masters chapter 29 . 10/18/2015
Oh, now I see...caught by a drule soldier, obviously he didn't live to do much. But still...poor thing, must've been terrified of it happening again.
Vanessa Masters chapter 27 . 10/18/2015
Hmmm~ "None of these women are exotic enough for keith."

I wonder if that means he prefers, alien women?

Mara might be in luck XD
Vanessa Masters chapter 26 . 10/18/2015
i love it. and the deep affection mara feels for keith. As well as how well shes doing playing keith.
Vanessa Masters chapter 25 . 10/18/2015
XD wow...Ryder has it bad. I wish there was art of him, I have only a vague idea of what he looks like. But he's a character :D
Vanessa Masters chapter 24 . 10/18/2015
Oh, all the drama and emotion. But i love it, and the feelings that seem to be springing between them. I mean, i know lotor says he's in love with her but the mroe the two get to know each other. it'll be a real romance.
Vanessa Masters chapter 22 . 10/18/2015
*sucks through teeth*

Oooh. Eavesdropping Vorlac, and Allura's little slip might've lost her some ground with him.
Vanessa Masters chapter 21 . 10/18/2015
I'd love to see a bit of what Haggar is doing too, maybe she forms her own private army of Robeasts for Lotor? That'd be helpful.
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