Reviews for Fighting Destiny
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2016
Nice story, and kujo's father's one liners were quite funny, but yur pacing felt a bit rushed and the father seemed kinda stupid. And what happened to grevil?
Shadowblade chapter 13 . 10/5/2014
SeaOfWisdom18 chapter 13 . 10/29/2011
Oh my. That was unbearably fluffy. Dare I say it, offense. Ugh, I hate that phrase. This was good, but just a little fluffy as I said. I like my stories angsty or humorous or sightly fluffy, as you may have already figured out...But other than that, amazing.
SeaOfWisdom18 chapter 9 . 10/29/2011
LOL. "Who would put a gues in a cage?"

"Maybe I do."

This is definitely getting better.
SeaOfWisdom18 chapter 7 . 10/29/2011
ALright...the letter is the on Victorique sent isn't it? I didn't look at reviews nor did I skip chapters. This isn't pulling me in like other stories, but it's pretty good. Getting better, I should say, because I just reviewed a story from which I have never read before..and it's NOT pjo.
SeaOfWisdom18 chapter 5 . 10/29/2011
I don't watch this anime or read this type of manga, my good friend, and this didn't make sense. However, i decide to give this a chance and it's not bad. But you shouldn't EVER end a cliffhanger with "Wait.. Aren't you-" or "And it was-" or anything. It just isn't the best thing to do. But this is pretty good.
SnSAngel chapter 13 . 9/9/2011
Overall: CUTE! Loved it ~ :D
symmetrygirl808 chapter 13 . 7/22/2011
symmetrygirl808 chapter 12 . 7/22/2011

passbyer: why r u crying 'aww-ing' at something horrible?

cuz its a aborable and im a daughter of Hades P
symmetrygirl808 chapter 11 . 7/22/2011
i like the poem 3
symmetrygirl808 chapter 4 . 7/22/2011
wait...since victorique can read & she's smart y wouldn't she have thought/done dat already?
Jamie310 chapter 13 . 7/19/2011
Great little story**
Rei Sagara chapter 13 . 7/8/2011
Despite this being your first story, you did well! I liked the way you wrote the story, it helped add-on to the emotion making it more dramatic and tragic. :) Chapter 12 was done especially well, I could almost hear "Unity" playing while reading the letter and Victorique's nightmare. (like at the ending of episode 23)

My only complaints are the grammar and near the ending of this chapter. Whenever someone says something and the speaker is revealed right after the dialouge, replace the period with a comma and lowercase the "She"/"He" unless you use the person's actual name.

Ex. "You're not real." She said.

Should be: "You're not real," she said.

Just a small slip-up, it's nothing a short edit can't fix. :)

After the fight between Kujo and his father, him just giving up on his ideals didn't seem right. It was an emotional moment, sure, but he gave up too fast. After all that talk, one fight with his son instantly changed that? Seems a little out of character for anyone to me.

Anyway, other than those small mistakes, it was an enjoyable story overall and very well-writen for it being your first time writing. While it didn't leave a tear in my eye, it was able to jerk at my heart a bit and actually make me able to FEEL their emotions. Congrats on managing to complete this wonderful story and I hope this review will help you in future stories, if even a little! I hope to see more from you soon,

JDRIZZLE chapter 13 . 7/7/2011
Nice story, seemed a little rushed at some points, but still engaging, I look forward to your next release! ~
James Birdsong chapter 13 . 7/2/2011
You're welcome. This final chapter is nice. Yay for cookies and new plush.
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