|Reviews for Forbidden Desires|
| angelg0722 chapter 25 . 4/29/2013
Please update soon!
| AspergianStoryteller chapter 21 . 12/11/2012
Interesting how this has grown from a small love story between a sadist and a masochist to overseas contacts, networks and middleschoolers involved in deadly business. Works either way.
| a.brief.dalliance chapter 25 . 11/13/2012
I really enjoyed this story, it was well constructed and written, and although sadism and masochism is definitely not up my alley, the way you expressed it was controlled and the actions were understandable and worked well. I got a bit confused and was startled by the introduction of assassins and black market but it added an interesting twist to the story in whole.
So well done! Off to read the sequel now!
| Sharon T chapter 25 . 8/22/2012
Wow great story:)
| Vein's Simply Tired chapter 10 . 7/25/2012
taste blind xD
| Vein's Simply Tired chapter 6 . 7/25/2012
so true lol, honestly I'm a bit masochist too, but people around me act like I'm suicidal D:
| Shizaki Kuro chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
LOVE this fic
| Wolfluver18 chapter 25 . 7/10/2012
awww.. syuusuke gets his perfect match in ryoma. who knew they're odd personalities would help them fit together? loved it. great development of both story and characters
| Bri chapter 25 . 5/3/2012
This is a story I really didn't expect to like much, just because of the premise, but when I clicked on it anyway, I found myself pleasantly surprised. It was very tastefully done, and I really liked how you portrayed Fuji. He's such a complicated character, and I felt that you did a wonderful job showing him as you saw him while not making him OC. Everything was very well written, and I really enjoyed it. Good job!
| tsukuyomi.sakurachi chapter 25 . 4/15/2012
I like it! _ I'm assuming that there's a sequel for this since I've read it in your profile. Altogether, I really appreciated this fic. It's really awesome! _ I love stories about sadism and masochism that's why I describe this fic as amazing to my eyes. Also, sorry XP I didn't read the last chapter because it's lemon. I don't think I'm old or mature enough to read lemon stories..._
| Dimensional Roamer chapter 25 . 2/23/2012
Nice story; I greatly enjoyed reading it. DR
| So1Thought chapter 7 . 11/12/2011
I have no problem with masochistic people... But Ryoma just doesn't seems like the person for that... Still, it's your story :)
Interesting chapter, looking forward to the next chapter...
| blackxxcat013 chapter 25 . 9/28/2011
I can't believe I ignored this for so long OAO I feel ashamed of myself. This is such an amazing fic! When I started reading I couldn't stop and it pained me to detach myself from it. Wonderful! I really love how you explored Fuji's sadism and how you turned Ryoma into a masochist to fit Fuji's needs(?) was just amazing I really love this fic! Thanks for sharing! XD
| RinRinChii chapter 25 . 9/7/2011
Hmm.. I don't really know what to say, except for the fact that that fanfic was awesome :3 I really like the fact of Fuji's a sadist xP since I'm kinda part-sadist myself, I kinda understand what it would feel like. It's really so amazing how he's got that kind of background xD though I'm not really into sadomasochism o.o but it was okay, xD still. w I can't stop feeling so amazed with Fuji's character here x3 he's really so cool o.o and Hayashi Sora is too :3 I'm seriously too much of a sadist fan, aren't I? ;o
Well, anyway, all in all, the story was good. :D Though I have to agree with what Catkac said.. There just too many things left out.. The thing with Tony really got me hangin' o.o and also about Sora's aunt(?)... Please so elaborate... But SERIOUSLY, other than the few missing parts, IT WAS A GREAT STORY. :D
| Catkac chapter 25 . 8/21/2011
I have to say... This is one of the best Thrill Pair fanfictions I've ever read. After reading the first two paragraphs, I was mesmerised. I only hoped you would fulfill my expectations.
Though there are two complaints I, as a general fan fiction fan, have:
1. The part where Ryoma was playing Arai with that old racket - in the anime, Fuji had a comment about ''a writer and a pen'' or something like that. I was hoping it would be included, but his comment in this fanfic was different. Just curious - did you pick it from the manga or did you come up with it yourself?
2. The ending - totally unsatisfying! Well, not completely, I mean, the sex was great... even though it took me additional 2 minutes to go to to get my porn and I was totally depraved by then. Which made the gentle love making even more worth reading. But that's not what I'm unsatified with. What happened to Tony? Could you elaborate why he let his dogs loose on Ryoma's ex? What about the bug-thing Fuji was worried about? That wasn't elaborated... And that aunt Sayuri-something (Did I get the name right? She was only mentioned once, I think.) - how did she contribute to the story other than being a potential fear factor?
But that's just me speaking. All in all, your story was and is beutiful. I just have to mention a few typos here and there, a word or two missing sometimes (just a suggestion, if you have time, try to find mistakes I found very obvious in the last chapter in the first two paragraphs).
You don't know what that dialogue with Fuji and Ryoma revealing their sadism and masochism did to me. After rereading it three times, I had to listen to Tom Lehrer's Masochism Tango twice to calm myself down even a little. I do hope you will someday elaborate with a sequel, or at least a bonus story or two. It would be such a shame to not continue...
So... after this long rant (sorry if you got annoyed by it), I'll subscribe to you in hopes of encountering another masterpiece - no pressure. No pressure at all... *evil laugh*