Reviews for Portal: Prelude Convention
Cati chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
... Why did the characters suddenly turn into Homestuck characters?
ASBusinessMagnet chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
To Nobody:

IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE THAT WAY. IT'S PORTAL: THE 4TH MILLENNIUM FRANCHISE.

(Yeah, I clicked on my own fan fiction just so say that.)
Nobody chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Not sure if it's just me, but I don't understand this at all...

It's really confusing, names are given and not explained, there is a lot of stuff popping up which I'm not sure what it is, and the speech marks seem to be used for no reason some time. Also, the time travel is not explained, there are talking boxes, and... the story is not properly progressed enough.
Nao chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
...I demand you write Portalstuck. Please.
Negative Reviews chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
Well, the story itself may be fine, but ouch, wall of text hurts eyes. And then at the end your formatting is fine. Lol, maybe fix that (:?
Guest chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
it was ok but not realy my kind of portal fanfick