Reviews for The First Five Kisses
eftela chapter 5 . 4/18/2015
Beautiful..That was beautiful, man. The feels I can't. I like how this story is so much deeper and there're a lot of emotions involved and I love the mother and son scenes. The fact that they could be so honest with their mother about how confused and anxious they are about their feelings. That alone shows that what they're feelings are genuine. And oh, man, that hit me right in the kokoro! This gives off a totally different feeling than your other fic 'Notice'. While the other was cute and sweet and gives out a light, fluffy feeling, this one has a lot more depth and their every interactions make my chest tightened deliciously. OMG! I have so much more to say but this is getting longer and I don't think I can string more sentences that would make sense so I guess...I love you! Thank you for writing this! Kyahhhh!
OptimusPrimeAddict chapter 5 . 7/24/2014
This was gorgeous. Like, I completely loved all of it. From the plot to the description to the dialogue, ugh it was perfect :D I'm actually gonna read it again right now :D:D:D
Abigail Thalia La Rue chapter 5 . 1/28/2013
Funny how you say reviews are addicting, when that is the exact same word I would use to describe my feelings towards this story.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/8/2013
this was the best hanai/tajima story i have EVER read! plz write more! its so addicting! :P
SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 5 . 5/11/2012
Hanai! You are such a wife quality character! Responsible and well intended at times! Kyaaaa! Tajima is such a childish baby that needs all the attention he can get! He's so lovable. Xd
swooooon chapter 5 . 1/8/2012
kdhvfhkvhdj chapter 4 . 1/8/2012
/3 D':
Guest chapter 3 . 1/8/2012
i dunno wether to cry or laugh or rejoice or be angry _'
tripwork chapter 5 . 7/13/2011
Asses adorable...
SitDog-Boy chapter 5 . 7/8/2011
Second favorite chapter! You tell him, Hanai! I love that he told the coach what to do and she listened. XD She's awesome. And I hope those two get back to the game. Nice ending! Kiss and make up! o
SitDog-Boy chapter 4 . 7/8/2011
Ouch, indeed. I feel bad for both of them, but this misunderstanding works for them. Very well done. _
SitDog-Boy chapter 3 . 7/8/2011
Brilliant! My favorite chapter, definitely. I love the game of keep away; it's so Tajima. X3 And the caring, although slightly embarrassed, moms. They are sweet. _
SitDog-Boy chapter 2 . 7/8/2011
Gosh, you two, out on the field? XD Just kidding, that makes it better! I love the funny and awkward moments between them. _ Nice job!
SitDog-Boy chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
Very cute. I love these two. - And I love Tajima's morning person hyperness. XD
Lovely-Ice chapter 5 . 6/29/2011
Omg that was so cute! I love these two, not as much as abe and mihashi though, lol :3
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