Reviews for Power
Jessica chapter 13 . 8/6
I like this story please continue writing it, I'm curious on how it will end.
Spellweaver10 chapter 13 . 2/2
This is a very good story. I realy like the plot. I'd love to read more.
LadyBardock chapter 13 . 4/22/2014
A very nice story I hope you'll update soon!
mireya chapter 13 . 3/27/2014
Porfavor actualiza!
jambacute chapter 13 . 7/4/2013
Love the plot, darkness and total obsession for power. awesome!
T. Alana M chapter 13 . 6/16/2013
Oh no, Bulma! Don't marry Yamcha!
Noip13 chapter 13 . 12/15/2012
Dark and creepy, but well written and so original! It's really great. I hope to see more of Kakarot soon!
Guest chapter 13 . 12/3/2012
Please update allready! Its one of the few stories I really like, it would be a pity to have it uncontinued.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/6/2012
Please update!
Guest chapter 13 . 11/6/2012
This is so good, please update!
Guest chapter 13 . 7/1/2012
I want more of this story: NOW.
Like right now. Ugh. It's so refreshing. HURRY UP PLEASE.
Breezybiatch chapter 13 . 5/22/2012
Omg, I don't know what to think and I don't really know what's going on anymore. Bur I love this au world you've created, it's so different and I can't wait to learn more about the seiyan world. And I see a ridiculously simple solution to this problem, it's called a long engagement. With being a top CEO and him a star player their bussy schedules should allow them very little time for this wedding thing. And I still think it's too soon after the cc problems were resolved. I don't even feel like they've known eachother more. And vegeta is pissing me off, what the he'll does the little bitch want? To share or not to share, because as much as I love his character he's going to lose me from his team if he is all but basically ramming yamuchas dick into bulmas puss. It's like he wants to torture himself, and that will get me tired and annoyed soon. I don't get it. If she's going to marry yamucha, who's a real nice character (dull) in this story, I hope he can be made happy. That involves a REAL relationship, with the bed sharing and regular good sex and a couple of little kids. But what then was the point with all that scandel of "your mine" blah blah when that guy was going at her? The inconsistency in character is annoying, it's like ur making if up as u go... (.., hmm... Not sure if that's too bad a thing...). And it bothers me to he'll that bulma has been avoiding or forgetting about the rape. Isn't she still angry? Wasn't she traumatized? How can she trust him, forgive him?

Nag nag nag. But I don't mean for u to stop ur writing, not at all- I just think u should address some of these things cause if I'm thinking them i'm sure others are too. Love you much, hope to read from u soon.
Mars chapter 12 . 5/22/2012
I love u! I don't ever want to stop reading this!
alixia chapter 13 . 4/14/2012
This is so awesome! I cant wait to read what happens next! Please update soon!

P.S. would you consider adding a preview of the next chapter at the end of every chapter?


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