Reviews for Jealousy makes 'em fall
James Birdsong chapter 9 . 3/12
Cool story.
Evil reviewer chapter 4 . 5/19/2014
Quite frankly it was interesting at first. Unfortunately, however, it was an interest that quickly dissipated as the method of the story being told was coming across as generic with each act, portent of dialogue dispensed, and handling of in-story criticism of other characters...

And quite frankly it could use a little bit of editing in some areas. Have a nice day for what it's worth!
Guest chapter 9 . 1/3/2014
I am sorry you don't write about the discussion betweem Skuld and keiichi. I hope you write it later.
Buster922 chapter 9 . 1/3/2014
Love this story, thank you :)
Deathmvp chapter 9 . 1/3/2014
Great job on finishing this story. I also love that you included the one you like more and want to thank you for that.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/28/2013
A bit on the short side but a really nice update.
ceroxon chapter 8 . 12/27/2013
It is good but... Sorry you don't explain the life of belldandy and keiichi in hell. Happy or not happy?
Deathmvp chapter 8 . 12/27/2013
Interesting fall out from Hild win. The only thing is it still leves things very open. Remeber when you post the next one post one you like more.
Skullders chapter 6 . 4/12/2013
Great chapter.
Skullders chapter 5 . 4/12/2013
Great story.
Ressan chapter 5 . 4/11/2013
Nice chapter.
Ressan chapter 2 . 4/11/2013
Nice story, interesting of it expanding on there being something rotten in "the kingdom of Denmark".
Ressan chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Interestig concept.
Shortchannel4 chapter 6 . 10/31/2012
Liking this story a lot. Please finish it
Deathmvp chapter 6 . 10/14/2012
Nice work on the talks in this chapter.
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