|Reviews for To Be A Lady|
| Tearrer chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
I find it highly amusing that somehow Hermione comes up whenever Draco is in one of your stories (this is the third time now). It's because they're meant for one another x3.
Anyways, I don't see why Draco's words would effect her more than her own families. If she'd be growing up with a hateful family, why did one person suddenly change her mind?
Still liked it! (:
| Cherriesxoxo2496 chapter 1 . 12/3/2011
Damn you Draco and Daphne. I felt so bad for Astoria but loved it when Draco was like, "You should have hit her back."
| vamosrafa chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
aw that made me sad but also i LOVED it!
| Analie Janes chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
I like it. It think it was a really sweet, sort of a coming of age story. She's naive, childish and tries to please everyone. I haven't seen anyone characterizing Astoria like that. It's sort of refreshing.
"She was a lady. Ladies didn't associate with Mudbloods."
That was really sad actually. She seemed like such a strong personality.
| xxx-angelin-xxx chapter 1 . 6/16/2011
I really want to know what caused that plot bunny... What were you thinking while writing this? Seriously, because this was THE BEST DracoAstoria-at school I've ever read!
1) Thank you very much for writing me a birthday fic! I didn't expect anything and I was so excited to recieve this:D
2) I usually don't read DracoAstoria-at school stories but this one is so good! I think it portrays both of them as kids very well. Pureblood kids aren't supposed to have muggle-born (out of Slytherin) friends; it's not justified from their upbringing. Draco knows that and Astoria knows that deep inside too.
3) The ending was the greatest moment in Astoria's life and in history of changing. She becomes a 'pureblood lady' the way her parents and curcle mean it. She grows up in a way. It's a big transformation and I can see the reasons behind it.
A great fic, dear Kim! Thank you for writing this:D
| Bardess of Avon chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
Er, *how* old is Astoria supposed to be in this fic? I thought you said second year, which would mean 12 or 13, but her entire behavior throughout the fic (not to mention Draco kneeling in front of her) implies she's six or seven.
| aleera chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
| MissingMommy chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
I really throughly enjoyed this piece. I like how you gave such unknown characters their own personalities.
Draco was right in character, which I applaud you for. It seems a lot of people make him out to be something he's not.
Daphne was an interesting character. She did fit in with the Slytherins perfectly.
Astoria, on the other hand, didn't seem to fit in until the very end. She seemed overly nice and naive. It wasn't until after her talk with Draco that it changed.
Overall, wonderful job. I didn't really notice any grammar mistakes.
| awakeatnight chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
This was really good! Of course the ending was sad, but it fit perfectly. I agree with your other reviewer, there really isn't enough done with Astoria. But good job!
| MidsummerNightGirl chapter 1 . 6/6/2011
That was stunning :) :) :)
I loved it, the raw emotion and politics. There isn't nearly enough fanfiction with Astoria. You can take her anywhere. Fabulous job