Reviews for Dream of Yesterday
Smashgunner chapter 28 . 10/14
This story ended before it's time...
Smashgunner chapter 18 . 10/13
No matter what Goku does everything will be fine.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/13
In the end of gt didnt goku hwve a tail? He was also able to go ss4
Doctor Dandy chapter 2 . 7/5
The butterfly effect is why stories like this are so boring to read. You have a beloved character acting intensely pathetic.
zanpaktospirit0 chapter 1 . 5/30
When you read the most recent update and miss the year portion
zanpaktospirit0 chapter 28 . 5/30
Updates yay
thai.khmerican chapter 28 . 5/13
Is Goku gonna get some bow chika wow wow? no I'm joking. but will he defeat frieza or will he bide his time like his original intentions.
Beggs chapter 26 . 4/18
Time for my annual review of a chapter! ( only lets you review one chapter once. Haha.)

Finished or not, this story is a fantastic work of art. While I'm selfish and hope that life settles down enough for you to continue writing, I hope everything is going great for you! Follow your passions and make the art thing work!

(Also, update your profile and let us know how you're doing!)
Guest chapter 10 . 3/17
There is one thing wrong with this story. Even if goku changed the time line it would have split off. Creating a new one. He could have saved planet vegeta without any consequences. And just used the dragon balls to return home.
CrazyScythe chapter 28 . 1/11
Even though this story is incompleted I don't regret reading it. One of the best dbz fics in my opinion.
CrazyScythe chapter 18 . 1/10
Pisses me that he forgot his comrades but saves Frieza. I mean this does make the story last longer so...
Eepee chapter 20 . 12/2/2015
Zarbon taking Goku to his quarters, and rape warning... I almost quit reading right there. :D
MalikJamalTimberlake chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
Tfs reference in the first chapter. Good job lol. Where's Vegeta? Sounds like your going for an AF feeling here sort of. I like it
Smithback chapter 28 . 9/8/2015
Please, this story is so awesome,.. so well written...
please, update soon.. or some day... please.

prety please...
Beggs chapter 28 . 9/5/2015
Because it is my birthday today, I humbly request that you start writing this story again. It's been a few years, but this is still the best DBZ time travel work of fiction on .

You're a terrific writer, and I have been itching for at least one more chapter for two years now. So please grant my birthday wish? Update a new chapter please! :)

You're awesome. Thank you for the work you've already posted, regardless of whether you post another or not (but PLEASE POST ANOTHER!)
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