Did steve not get stabbed in the prison then? Cause i dont remember it being mentioned and if so this sucks even worse its all about danny OCs and grace chin and kono barley get good focus and anything even mentioned about steve is bullshit and he doesn't get what really happened but yet danny got hurt this was aload of shit and misleading

Ok im just done with this now its not about the 5 0 family like it sounded its all about fucking annoying danny and his blood family and its boring now

Yup i was right its all about danny 5 chapters in and its all been about danny or dannys family not 5 0 or steve this SUCKS

Hmm somehow i already feel thing is gonna be about danny not steve or the hawaii "family"

oh boy~ poor poor Danny and Andy. Danny's parents (who r actually named Clara and Eddie) and Andy's wife (because apparently Danny does have three sisters and Matt but we don't know the name of that last sister. we know Stella who is Eric's mom and met Bridget) r coming to Hawaii...that's not good. that's not good at all. we still don't know if Rachael is even still alive at this point. this is turning out to be an awesome story.

you should continue this! It's REALLY good! I wanna know what happens to Andrew! Please?

Yes you're still working on it! Thanks!

That can't be good...

Haha! I love it!

Yay, Danny's alive! Does happy dance.

What happened? I must know!

i
love your story please write more soon

Alright Molly, you go girl!

The bad guys won't know what hit them if Molly gets involved. I'm worried about Andrew.

Such a good story - please finish when you have time!