|Reviews for Hiding In Plain Sight|
| CosmicParasite chapter 1 . 3/20
I really, really liked this. But it was so rushed at the end. You made it very clear that their were mutual feelings between Spencer and Aaron, but the sudden admission of love didn't seem fitting. I think if this fic was more drawn out it would've worked out a little better.
Nonetheless, I did enjoy this story. Thank you for sharing your writing. :)
| lou chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
loved this story
| MikeyL0VER chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
Loved it part 2 ?
| Motaku1235 chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
*Dying from the feels over here!*
| Criminds chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Loved it! Especially the ending :) I love Reid/Hotch!
| AngiePowers493 chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Awouww :-). This was so nice 3 Well, them getting together.
So far, out of the few stories I've read where Reid is in an abusive relationship, the boyfriend's name is Michael XD But, nonetheless, I still despise him, and think he should go rot in a trash can.
| CallMeCrazyBabee chapter 1 . 7/15/2012
That's sad but very romantic... Please make a sequel
| LithiumFlower13 chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
talk about leaving your audiance hanging!
| AGreatPerhaps12 chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
This oneshot was really, really good. You wove in the angst perfectly: it made me "aww" like a sitcom audience and grip my mouse in suspense before Hotch saved Spencer, but none of the characters were unbelievable saps, which is so often the case in angst stories. So kudos for walking that fine line without over doing it. If you did add a second chapter, I'd be really excited to read it. Thanks for posting!
| AncientPurebloodPrincessLolita chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Cute... at least the end was...
I LOVE IT!
Reid is just too cute not to rape! That bastard Michael didn't deserve him though...
-Hearts u 4 publishing-
| Sharon T chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
Very good, sequel ? :)
| Abandon Morality chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Flames are an important part of developing as a writer. If you can't take it, then you have no business writing.
This story was good, but you had several awkward sentances that threw it off. Plot sequence could have been better; try to draw it out, perhaps on paper. This will enable you to see if you've skipped any relevant information and fix it properly. Instead of throwing some random information in to hide a plot hole.
Overall, good, but not great.
PS If you think that this is a flame, then you have no idea how cruel reviews can get.
| DarkSecretLove chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
I didn't think I could actually get into Hotch and Reid together until earlier this evening. This story just broke my heart... poor Reid... though I'm glad Hotch and Morgan found him...
| chgkfdgfgfkjghjfy chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
Aww this is absolutely awesome
| EightAndNine chapter 1 . 8/9/2011
I loved itttt! Although I cried when I read the Reid abuse/3 Its was an amazing story!