|Reviews for The Photograph|
| JadeFoxfire chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
*sniff* *sniff* That was so...sweet... wahhhhh. I really enjoyed it. Even if it was really sad...
| The Silent Insomniac chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Ignoring the minor spelling errors here and there, I must say it's decent.
The fates of the Twelve varied and you clearly identified the changes a real war can bring to one's personality. I find Yamato's disappearance and Takeru's mysterious but inevitable demise as something that may be worth looking into. Taichi became a callous general? Daisuke, a pitiful shadow of his former self?
If played right this could technically be turnef into a prologue of an brutal war between the forces of darkness and whatever remained of the Chosen Children. I think the emotions of despair & longing, along with the themes this piece emits are better off being written in a story rather than a reflective one-shot (I'm assuming this is one), one you would be capable of writing considering you pulled this one off.