|Reviews for Such a Flirt|
| Tallulah Grammar Songstress chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Aww, very cute! Some nice banter in there, and I like Amy and Rory's realisation at the end!
(This is versipellis, btw.)
| KateDan72 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
River and Doctor banter, is there anything better? You have captured the characters so well. I just wonder how Amy and Rory would feel about the innuendo given recent revelations... chapter 2 maybe?
Anyway, loved it! For a first DW fic you've certainly got the characters down pat! Keep writing them!
| MoonStoneFairy89 chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
So much love for River/Eleven and their saucy banter!
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Excellent story. Some love it. Maybe this is perfect
| betawho chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
I loved so many lines in this:
“I'm fully loaded.”
Oh, if ever a character had the right to say that, it’s River.
"Better start stocking up on the aspirin then, shall we, Doctor?"
"That's really not funny, you know."
“Rory could never tell if they were serious about any of it, or if they were just trying to pass the time. Either way, it was fascinating to watch.”
So true. Love it.
“This side of him seemed to amuse River to no end and she loved baiting him. The Doctor never seemed reluctant to oblige either, so Amy guessed that he was also having fun on some level.”
This is one of the things I love best about River Song, she can pull out a side of the Doctor not generally seen. I usually don't like Doctor romances, but I just love him and River Song together, they’re so snarky and lovable at the same time. :D
“That kind of talk was alright for private, but privacy was not in the Doctor's substantial cache of words and phrases.”
You know, that’s true, and it’s really weird, because it iis/i true, when he’s also the most intensely private person at the same time.
“Even after all this time, though, she could never tell when the Doctor was just playing along, or if it actually turned him on. Perhaps it was a little bit of both, but one could never be entirely sure.”
Hah! Yet another thing you got so completely right! One minute the Doctor is the oldest, wisest, most mature person in the room, the next he’s a blushing boy. Master manipulator one minute, geek with a crush the next. :D
Loved this! Thanks for writing that. I had a smile on my face the whole time.
Considering your writing style you might be interested in looking at a couple of my short fics, “It Was Just a Kiss” and “Stormcage” also about the Doctor and River. You can look them up here on under the user name betawho.
| Journal Of Ardency chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
This was amazing - the look into they're little arguments and quips was very well done!
| Alison chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Love, love, and more love. Your dialogue is great, you've captured Eleven and River perfectly.
| hannahncakes chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
*squeals with delight*
oh I love it I love it I love.
| werewolfatemyphoenix chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
Just wanted to say I think your Doctor/River banter is perfect. And of course you can make up space terms. It's pretty much what Steven Moffat does. The only difference is he gets paid to do it :p
| MayFairy chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
haha this was hilarious and so true!
i think my favourite bit was the aspirin. pure genius, i love it when people bring it up!
| alphayamergo chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
I feel slightly guilty for favouriting this, because I'm an AmyxEleven shipper all the way, but this is so unbelievably cute I had to.
| gidget89 chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
This was completely and utterly adorable. Excellent job :)