Reviews for The Phoenix and Raven Dojutsu
BartWLewis chapter 18 . 10/19
Coolio.
my 2 guys chapter 18 . 8/25
that was good keep the chapters coming
ivanganev1992 chapter 4 . 8/14
Ch 4

Phoenix first wing of the fire feather . Strength.
ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 8/14
Ch 2

Fawkners the phoenix from Harry Potter reborn in Konoha /ninja world? Naruto mini Itachy?

So far chains/shadow clone ,wind dragon.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/28
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draco7347 chapter 18 . 7/13
really love this story cant wait for new chapters
GOD chapter 3 . 6/21
ok you seem to write things and then completely forget them as first you said that Naruto was a Tokubetsu CHUNIN and now you're saying he's a Tokubetsu GENIN so make up your mind which is it? Honestly with his fighting skills and his political skills he should clearly be at least Chunin. As for the Harem I'd say forget Kurotsuchi that would just never work she's from IWA and Naruto is a damn near clone of his father so she'd hate him off that alone the second she saw him even though I don't think she personally lost anybody in the war. I think you should add Yugao in instead. Also you mentioned opening the 7 gates without dying but there are 8 gates and you only die if you open all 8 BUT with Naruto's healing factor from Kurama he probably could open all 8 as long as someone like Tsunade was nearby to help with the healing
marquis.shax chapter 1 . 6/21
Naruto would've easily defeated the Chidori as long as he used more chakra since wind cancels out lightning
Voltrasin chapter 6 . 6/21
Sakura's mom... an ANBU captain? I don't believe I have seen this before. Interesting.
R-king 93 chapter 18 . 6/20
Nice
FinalKingdomHearts chapter 18 . 6/20
I look forward to the next chapter.
WolfCoyote chapter 7 . 6/20
hell hounds now that's origional if the poll is still up that's got my vote
Guest chapter 3 . 6/20
Me and sasuke kun #Triggered sasuke and I.
NinjaFang1331 chapter 18 . 6/20
nice job
Guest chapter 18 . 6/20
Thankyou for updating.
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