Reviews for The Phoenix and Raven Dojutsu
lara5170 chapter 18 . 8/31
I've enjoyed reading this but it doesn't look like it's being continued.
lara5170 chapter 7 . 8/31
I would have picked foxes but since that isn't an option I would pick hellhounds (like cerebus) or kraken
Guest chapter 11 . 6/11
Gotta say this could be great but it's not quite there. You keep trying to make him cunning and intelligent but the situations you set up to showcase these attributes are terrible. The story started out well enough at the beginning but really went downhill afterwards
MissFinest chapter 15 . 3/30
Fuck i hate Sakura. UNfollowing
Guest chapter 7 . 3/1
foxes
Summoning chapter 7 . 12/20/2016
Hell hounds FTW
Lewis-Sama chapter 18 . 10/19/2016
Coolio.
my 2 guys chapter 18 . 8/25/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
ivanganev1992 chapter 4 . 8/14/2016
Ch 4

Phoenix first wing of the fire feather . Strength.
ivanganev1992 chapter 2 . 8/14/2016
Ch 2

Fawkners the phoenix from Harry Potter reborn in Konoha /ninja world? Naruto mini Itachy?

So far chains/shadow clone ,wind dragon.
Guest chapter 10 . 7/28/2016
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adjective
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draco7347 chapter 18 . 7/13/2016
really love this story cant wait for new chapters
GOD chapter 3 . 6/21/2016
ok you seem to write things and then completely forget them as first you said that Naruto was a Tokubetsu CHUNIN and now you're saying he's a Tokubetsu GENIN so make up your mind which is it? Honestly with his fighting skills and his political skills he should clearly be at least Chunin. As for the Harem I'd say forget Kurotsuchi that would just never work she's from IWA and Naruto is a damn near clone of his father so she'd hate him off that alone the second she saw him even though I don't think she personally lost anybody in the war. I think you should add Yugao in instead. Also you mentioned opening the 7 gates without dying but there are 8 gates and you only die if you open all 8 BUT with Naruto's healing factor from Kurama he probably could open all 8 as long as someone like Tsunade was nearby to help with the healing
marquis.shax chapter 1 . 6/21/2016
Naruto would've easily defeated the Chidori as long as he used more chakra since wind cancels out lightning
Voltrasin chapter 6 . 6/21/2016
Sakura's mom... an ANBU captain? I don't believe I have seen this before. Interesting.
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