|Reviews for A New School Year|
| ict-welpje chapter 19 . 3/8
any chance of it gettig finished?
| Jamie Theobald chapter 7 . 6/20/2012
Is it Lockhart following Harry?
| 2-lazy-2-login chapter 19 . 6/13/2012
update! I 3 how sev is all like... Imma have a tlk with lockhart. Ps i dont normally speak like that...
| Dragonfire - Jessie Sparrow chapter 19 . 6/3/2012
| Squirrel of the Green Dawn chapter 18 . 5/26/2012
I think this is a really good story and I'm wondering what's going to happen to Lockhart. Does Snape use him for potion ingrediants?
| lin Kim chapter 18 . 2/20/2012
I was cracking up the whole time I was trying to read this and the previous part. Oh and I'm probably going to copy all (but personal info obviously) the stuff from your profile cuz I couldn't stop laughing at it- but I can't do it now unfortunately I'm rarely on a unblocked computer...
| Keli chapter 18 . 1/27/2012
Nice, Severus and Lockhart go at it.. :D fun.
| Keli chapter 4 . 1/27/2012
I just thought of something, instead of using ALL CAPS when Sev gets angry, he usually hisses or talks dangerously, use descriptive words after the quotes...
"xoxoxo" He said silkily
"or blah." She said with a low hiss, dangerously close.
It just adds to what the reader hears. by using ALL CAPS, the reader may believe he is yelling REALLY LOUDLY, but he's not.
| SuperWhoVengePottLokiLockLin chapter 18 . 12/31/2011
I uhmm, found and error in the first chapter...
"He knew, or rather, he hoped, that Severus would not forget his birthday But, if he didn't forget, Harry wondered what Severus would get him."
This sentence doesn't make sense, I mean it does when you read it three times, or at least that's what I had to do. I believe it should have been...
"He knew, or rather, he hoped, that Severus would forget his birthday, but, if he didn't forget, Harry wondered what Severus would get him."
You had basically said twice that Harry hoped Severus wouldn't forget his birthday, but I think you only meant it once...just thought you'd outta know.
Anyway, loving the story, can't wait for more.
| Hope06 chapter 4 . 11/26/2011
awww ending is right!
| Rose of Dark Life chapter 18 . 9/11/2011
hehehehe. Love it!
| Stephaniesaurus chapter 18 . 9/3/2011
KILL LOCKHART! muwahaha! does the school know about snape adopting harry? id love to see the reaction!
| YoruichiKittyCat16 chapter 18 . 8/27/2011
Haha I've been waiting for Sev to confront them about the stolen potions ingrediants
| ashtonangel13 chapter 18 . 8/25/2011
omg i luv ur lockheart! is harry gonna tell them about the lovenote? and when will u next be updating?
| cyiusblack chapter 18 . 8/25/2011