|Reviews for Please Help Me!|
| Rosewitch97 chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
I believe in constructive criticism! So here is some advice to you. It's a good story and I like it but it moves too fast. You also need to go back through and proofread, you're missing a lot of periods.
Over all I think it's a great story that can be made even better if you do these things.
Good luck and have fun!
| maiakahana244 chapter 1 . 9/19/2012
i'm going 2 kill the man who touched my naruto. sweet ending though.
| Bebe-chii chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
oh God..this is awesome..please update ne.
| Mizetta chapter 1 . 6/22/2011
his is very good i like it except the rape poor naru-chan! :(
| Thrift Shop chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Wow...'tis so sad...*sheds a tear* :(
I know this is your old story but below are a few pointers xD
You can improve on:
* The details...which will make it more heart-gripping for the reader
* The lemon OHOHOH~ ;P between Sasuke and Naurto...it just happened too fast
* How Naruto said he did want it and then tried to stop Sasuke...I get what you mean but it’s still kind of contradictory
OVERALL though...a good job :D Keep it up! *cheers*
XOXOXO~ Your protector ~Kira