Reviews for Times of Trouble
WizardWay chapter 3 . 6/15/2011
This is absolutely amazing! I've never seen anything like it! It's absolutely wonderful. Will Harry tell Albus about his future self? Because that would be so funny and cool. Update soon, please!

~WW
wolfergirl chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
This is amazing! Sorry, I would have reviewed earlier but my email's been playing up and I didn't get the alert until today :)
phoenixphlight chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Yeah! It's awesome!

Well, I like how flawed Albus is. Percival and Kendra seem nice but I'm not sure left. I like how you're using various ancestors.

Are you going to incorporate aspects of the Victorian Era into this story?

Where's Hermione? I think she's either with a pureblood family or with Muggles. She's gonna keep her mouth shut because she doesn't want to get into trouble. Harry and Neville won't find her until they go to Hogwarts.
DukeBrymin chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Chortle! I guessed it was Arianna.
DukeBrymin chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
So now I'm wondering who the blond girl is: Ariana? Luna? Petunia? Paris Hilton?
DukeBrymin chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Intriguing beginning.
Martel chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Oh, yeah, and I'm glad that you're writing Albus the way he was when he was young, and the detail with the potions taking longer here. (I still would take 1 hour of healing over the weeks it would take for muggles, though. XD)
Martel chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
I liked the vase too. "This would set her off into a fit of giggles that made Harry smile. (...) He was very glad he'd rescued her from those bullies."

This makes me want to smile and go all sad face at the same time. :(

I hope Hermione is okay! D:
akatrixie chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Whoaaaaaaaaaaaa man. So, is this gonna alter the future? Were those the bullies that Arianna's father saw beating her up? So he didn't go to Azkaban for doing magic on muggles? I mean, maybe it wasn't. But still.

And yaaaaaaaaaaaay it's Neville!
verynearlysouffled chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Awesome chapter :D
Nyaneko92 chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
it occurs to me that people in that time period probably wouldnt use the word freak

and potter may not be a common name, but its not rare either, whos to say theyre really related?

nit picking aside, i really did enjoy this(especially the vase!)
nicluvly chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Time-turners not invented huh? Sounds familiar. ROFL. I'm excited to see dumbledore as a child and them listening at the door was super adorable. I wonder how much Harry is going to change the past by being where he is now. And meeting Potters from the past! How exciting. Looking forward to the next installment.
little.lost.panda chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Yay, Neville was found and Arianna is safe! I love how Arianna is protrayed, she's so cute! Reminds me of Ginny somewhat, except that she seems a bit more childish, but that's because she's six or seven. Wonder what happened to Hermione...well, I just hope she's found soon! Update please, while I go check out those stories.
Lady Sabine of Macayhill chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Excellent fic. It is turning out as interesting as the last one.
Bellissa96 chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Interesting story!

I hope you update soon :)
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