|Reviews for The Paradox Girl|
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/25/2013
But River is part Time Lord!
| timano chapter 32 . 6/24/2012
I've enjoyed your story-you offer good writing, fully fleshed-out characters, and careful plotting that sets you aside from many fanfiction writers. 10 out of 10 stars. (And I want to read more about Merry!)
| caitlin jane chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
I love this story,and your over one that leads on dont get me wrong but theres something about this one that is one the fan fics I'm always going to come back to read and enjoy reading :D
| PresidentTheAwesome chapter 31 . 11/15/2011
Hello *waves* I love this story! And I'm wondering if it's finished or? It's just I'm hoping your going to update soon as it's one of my favourite Doctor/River fics ;D
| AWOL93 chapter 12 . 11/1/2011
ahah, it was 3.30 in the morning when i read "how could you be so stupid!" and it all clicked into place... i remember exclaiming really loudly "ITS A BIODAMPER! I get it!" snapping my fingers and rolling over in bed... satisfied i must have fallen asleep becuase when i woke up just now, my laptop was open to this, stearing me in the face like a big "read on" sighn... so i did... and then i read the title pressing the next button and relised that i would have relised so much earlier if I'd read that... bit of a spoiler thoughs good ol' titles. :P
wow this 'as been sitting here since I woke up at 5am... that was oh... four hours ago :P I was buisy reading on in another tab.
I read your replie to my earlier review and it made me happy!
and yeah, it means life iand/i death as you said, though usualy life is the prefered translation. I never thought of it that way though... all paradoxy its a very cool interpretation. would be a realy good name for someone who died at birth but was brought back by the "magic of modern medicen" :P
sorry for just- well- blahing at you.
| AWOL93 chapter 4 . 11/1/2011
I'm just starting to read your story (obviously) and I have to say, that I love it so far!
your a really good righter. I love the detail you put in with the sounds and actions and sents to i guess... because I'm dyslexic it reall makes reading easier... which means, I'll probrably, actualy dedicate to reading your whole story now!
also love the idea of the doctor and river having a daughter, its very er, warm and fuzzy i guess. haha.
In this chapter I especialy liked the detail on the glass and her name... its quite brilliant.
took a while for me to relise why it sounded femilar then i remembered that "Merripen" when used as a name means "life" in Romany. so that was a nice touch for my personal contex. (if that makes scence)
anyways back to reading! :D
| Elliewelly1 chapter 31 . 10/24/2011
Oh, I really do wish you'd carry on with this story. :( I miss it so much.
| Morzan's Elvish Daughter chapter 31 . 10/3/2011
roflmao! Sorry it took me so long to read this. Laptop crashed.
| Guest chapter 31 . 9/20/2011
please say you're still continueing with this story? :S
| Doctor-River chapter 31 . 8/22/2011
Ooh, me very much likey this chapter! ;-)
It was River just messing with his mind, that was well played... Plus I like River in sexy clothes!
| JoeBob1379 chapter 31 . 8/20/2011
Oh, that was PERFECT! Haha! Love it :)
| Guest chapter 31 . 8/20/2011
YAY! River! So glad she's back :D well i mean that she's not being called Melody anymore. I'm going to try and watch your youtube video later. And dont say that reading this would get boring coz it really wont, I love you fic :P
| Secrets-0f-dreams chapter 31 . 8/19/2011
well duh dr they are the same person honestly men are slow, and thankyou river for killing the helmet because it was disatorous lol
| Secrets-0f-dreams chapter 30 . 8/15/2011
aww poor dr rory is so mean! i hope it goes better for the two
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/14/2011
Poor Doctor, I feel really sorry for him! I do hope the honeymoon is better