Reviews for Pat's Mansion
mysteriousguy898 chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
I was excited because you were using the English names for the characters (a real rarity on this site), but then I caught fifteen verb tense errors, misplaced articles, and other grammar blunders in as many seconds. This is painful to read.
Felineguardian chapter 4 . 1/31/2013
I love the story. Hope you will continue the story!