|Reviews for Come Undone|
| avagurl chapter 1 . 6/8
Love your story.
| Foenix2phorks chapter 1 . 6/11/2022
The blame for their marriage meltdown was more Edward's fault than Bella's, in my opinion. She tried for years to reason with him but he pretty much ignored her concerns. Plus, he's the one that filed for divorce! I'm glad they worked it out, but I hope this "new" Edward will try harder to make his marriage work.
Ok, rant over, lol! Thanks for writing. :-)
| BethMasenCullen chapter 1 . 5/16/2022
This was so beautiful! Thank you for writing it!
| Paliia chapter 1 . 3/20/2022
I read it a long time ago but I still love this so much! Thank you for sharing!
| Pattsy1994 chapter 1 . 6/19/2021
Great story, great ending. Thank you very much.
| Midnight Cougar chapter 1 . 4/5/2021
I just reread this, and it’s still just as fantastic! Such a great one shot.
| miakayuki1989 chapter 1 . 11/25/2020
i don't ussually review bvoz i'm lazy but you deserve to know that i think you have a talent with writing! keep it up!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/3/2020
It’s been a while since I left a review, but I have to say I liked your story very much. Congrats
| twi2escape chapter 1 . 6/8/2020
Thank you for a sweet O/S. I needed Something short and light. Hope they can work it out!
| PLV chapter 1 . 12/30/2019
| VryUnique chapter 1 . 8/22/2019
I enjoyed the story but all my questions weren’t answered. Why did Edward file for divorce the next day? If I was Bella I would have asked that question at the end of her rant. Bella kept saying how everything was her fault but couples fight and say things they don’t mean all the time. Actions speak louder than words and Edward’s actions is what broke up their marriage.
I’m betting he would have said that he was giving her what she wanted even if he broke his own heart, that he wanted her to be happy. I assume something to that effect, I would have liked to hear it from him.
I’m a bit annoyed at Charlie and the so called friends who seemed to take Edward’s side. Anyone who had all the facts should have been asking Edward what the hell his problem was.
I loved the gorgeous blond in the apartment and would have liked it more if she was a clingy neighbor who didn’t have a chance in hell. I always like a little drama.
Thanks so much for the story, I really enjoyed it and would have liked it to be longer.
| IAMBOBBYSGIRL197 chapter 1 . 6/8/2019
I'VE READ THIS MANY TIMES AND EVEN REMEMBER YOUR LONGER VERSION WHICH UNFORTUNATELY LOST SOME...I'M NOT SURE WHAT EXACTLY BUT I TRULY BELIEVE YOU CAN RE-WRITE A BETTER MUCH LONGER AND VERY DETAILED VERSION OF THIS GREAT STORY. MAYBE I'M THINKING OUT LOUD AND HOPING YOU WOULD CONSIDER RE-WRITING IT OVER AGAIN! MAKE A FEW NEW CHANGES AND... WELL YOU GET THE IDEA. I LEFT A REVIEW IN 2014 BOBBYSGIRL1976
| cullensrule chapter 1 . 6/8/2019
I loved your story. That they came together in end for each other was great. The baby might have provided the the need to talk but they got back together for themselves all the more that it will be successful.
| jenner2611 chapter 1 . 6/8/2019
Really enjoyed this story...
| Lillywhite1 chapter 1 . 2/24/2019
Thanks for writing this wonderful story!