|Reviews for Rowan of Rin Remake: Book 1|
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/4/2013
rowan is a weakling and was not strong like the others. one night Rowan woke up thinking about his decision if he wont's to go on the big journey up the huge, scary hill to make the villages beautiful river flowing and so the bukshah has water to drink.
| Alice chapter 2 . 10/23/2013
I think you did a great job following the story line :) awesome start
| Ella chapter 3 . 9/5/2013
I think that your language is very rich such as 'seven hearts will carry on when sleep is death hope is gone'. This riddle is very engaging and the rest of the story. The language is very descriptive to. Overall I think this chapter is great!
| Ella chapter 2 . 9/5/2013
I think that that Emily Rodda's Books Rock!
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
| qwerr chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
nice story i read it at school it was awsome if i had to rate it out of 10 it would be 100 out of 10
| Justine Perante chapter 3 . 12/12/2012
Hey! Good job with the story! Oh and can you do chapter 4? pretty please?
| TranscodeShadowCerberus chapter 3 . 11/23/2012
Please update soon I love this series so much and adding a new character into it is brilliant
| Lilly chapter 3 . 8/30/2012
I think it's awesome but if you kept the seven hearts a journey makes seven ways the heart with break the same it would be radical and I think it's claw some lumping claw some oh and u rock
| alex hills chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
hi its dah very good
| Rainhealsme chapter 3 . 3/28/2012
From this chapter, Sheba has become one of my favorite characters already. If you've ever played Dragon Quest VI, Sheba acts similar to an elderly woman named Madame Fortune, who was big help throughout the game. I know you’ve haven’t updated probably because school life, the lack of feedback, or writers’ block, but whatever the case, I hope you write more soon. Oh, and if you’re looking to receive more feedback, try posting in some of the forums. The Reviewer Lounge Too is where I usually hang out and play review tag.
Anyway, thanks for sharing this great story.
| Rainhealsme chapter 2 . 3/28/2012
I was just checking out random profiles when I came across yours, and decided to read your story. So far, I’ve only read the short profile and of course this chapter, but so far you’ve captured my attention. I spotted only minor grammar mistakes, ones that I tend to make myself. But all in all this pretty good. It’s like a mixture between The Legend of Zelda and Dragon Quest. And just up your review count, I’ll review the next chapter as well. :)
| AspergianStoryteller chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
You might try revelaing an oc to readers through the story rather than just telling us. Treat her like a new character being introduced bit by bit. Show rather than tell.
| DarkRoguePhantom chapter 3 . 6/10/2011
Althea said without emotions. "You are scary the boy." It should be 'scare' .
Your descriptions, both mental and physical, are so vivid. I like how you switch POV's smoothly and your story has a deep undercurrent to it that is perfect. Keep writing. This chapter is even better than the last.