|Reviews for Dessert First|
| LilyAceThompson17 chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
It was beautiful and sad. I enjoyed and loved this.
| Caroline the Poet chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
I loved this story it was just awesome!
| swanhooked chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
Wow! This was so good! Really simple yet you captured a perfect moment, you know?
Remember Me's my favorite movie because it had such a huge impact on me. Ally's thing with the dessert coming into play for Tyler was really foreshadowing moment. They should've put something like that in the movie :)
Anyway lol great job! loved it
| foreveracountrygirl chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
HOORAAY! i think im the first to reveiw! it was really good! i loved how you showed his emotions while he was waiting. in the next chapter can you explain how micheal died a bit better? i am a bit curious... And Tyler's dad works in the twin towers? if so you did a SUPERB job of foreshodowing. i'm really anxious to see what happens next. i'm also cunfuzzled about the quote at the end but YOU DID AN EXCELLENT JOB! I love it! i really want to watch the movie now! oh and why is he meeting with the lawyer? did he like kill someone? now i know a lot of my questions will be answered in the next chapter but i want to ask them anyway so you will remember to write about them :D I LOVE THIS STORY ALEX! 3 ~Susie