Reviews for Spoils of War
strabimonx chapter 1 . 11/18/2014
Nice
Wolfang21 chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
Ah band camp. Never gets old
jake chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
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The Deadly Deadpool chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
thank you it was awesome
Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 1/23/2014
Lol at the end.
phantom frost chapter 1 . 11/4/2013
U should continue this
serialkeller chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
That was super hot, good stuff _
TruShadowKing chapter 1 . 9/24/2013
That was...hot and that ending...lol
Rolling Guy chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
Well, it's not that dark. Naruto's a bit OOC but it's understandable to make this happen. I'm never fond of rape but surprisingly, I don't seem to mind this. It might be that there was little to no resistance coming from Tayuya and Naruto still treated her kindly in what little way possible. I don't know, I think at some point it became consensual judging by how Tayuya acts afterwards. To be honest, I skimmed through Temari's part as I wasn't really interested in her at the time. Good read. Wish there was more. Submissive Tayuya is pretty interesting. Not a lot of her portrayed like that here in FF.
lestibur chapter 1 . 9/14/2013
nice!
Maverick Wilde chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Love the last line
Lman3 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
Love it after all everybody know that ANYTHING can happen at band camp.
kaimasters chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
The Ending...wtf lol xd, you could have made a awesome 2nd chapter lol
Tirion Fordring chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
laughed so fucking hard at the lat line my grandma thought something was wrong... fucking love American Pie xD
Shawn2012 chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
You should make a sequel
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