Reviews for Breathe
too many mary sues chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Please write another story that is not centered on an oc character. There are way to many stories that are centered on oc characters and hardly any stories based only Tolkiens characters.
Strawbaby Chick chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
That was cute : ) Dramatic, sweet, and had great rhyming and rhythm as well. Good job!
Chewiecotton chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
very good